Date: Sat, 13 Apr 2002 18:50:51 -0700 (PDT) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs article.sgml Message-ID: <200204140150.g3E1opH47200@freefall.freebsd.org>
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keramida 2002/04/13 18:50:51 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs article.sgml
Log:
Round #1 of various updates/fixes to this article.
In the bandwidth requirements section:
- Properly finish sentences with fullstops.
- Remove "probably" and similar words. We shouldn't sound like we
don't know if the requirements are true.
PR: docs/37037
Submitted by: Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
Revision Changes Path
1.14 +3 -4 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml
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