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Date:      Fri, 24 Mar 2023 22:37:05 GMT
From:      Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   git: d343022941 - main - 12.4R/errata: beautify the open issues area
Message-ID:  <202303242237.32OMb5HC053770@gitrepo.freebsd.org>

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The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=d343022941fc248b7d236158f4c7fe378c0d5d49

commit d343022941fc248b7d236158f4c7fe378c0d5d49
Author:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-03-24 22:27:36 +0000
Commit:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-03-24 22:36:42 +0000

    12.4R/errata: beautify the open issues area
    
    An issue that is published as an erratum – at a page such as
    https://www.freebsd.org/releases/12.4R/errata/
    – is inherently important, no need to describe it as such.
    
    By not using a table to present the erratum, we avoid the two rendering
    issues that were pictured by emaste at
    https://reviews.freebsd.org/D38999#887707
    
    Whilst here:
    
    * add a missing full stop (.)
    * one sentence per line.
    
    Approved by:           emaste
    Fixes:                 84b3c465a2 Add OpenSSH updating note to 12.4 errata page
    Differential revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D39243
---
 website/content/en/releases/12.4R/errata.adoc | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/errata.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/errata.adoc
index bf6d5e543a..b06fc59fbc 100644
--- a/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/errata.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/releases/12.4R/errata.adoc
@@ -10,7 +10,9 @@ sidenav: download
 
 == Abstract
 
-This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation. This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability. An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
+This document lists errata items for FreeBSD {release}, containing significant information discovered after the release or too late in the release cycle to be otherwise included in the release documentation.
+This information includes security advisories, as well as news relating to the software or documentation that could affect its operation or usability.
+An up-to-date version of this document should always be consulted before installing this version of FreeBSD.
 
 This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the FreeBSD {release} end of life.
 
@@ -25,9 +27,11 @@ This errata document for FreeBSD {release} will be maintained until the FreeBSD
 [[intro]]
 == Introduction
 
-This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release} Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
+This errata document contains "late-breaking news" about FreeBSD {release}.
+Before installing this version, it is important to consult this document to learn about any post-release discoveries or problems that may already have been found and fixed.
 
-Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release. These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
+Any version of this errata document actually distributed with the release (for example, on a CDROM distribution) will be out of date by definition, but other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be consulted as the "current errata" for this release.
+These other copies of the errata are located at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/, plus any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this location.
 
 Source and binary snapshots of FreeBSD {releaseBranch} also contain up-to-date copies of this document (as of the time of the snapshot).
 
@@ -54,11 +58,8 @@ For a list of all FreeBSD CERT security advisories, see https://www.FreeBSD.org/
 [[open-issues]]
 == Open Issues
 
-[IMPORTANT]
-====
 If upgrading from an earlier version of FreeBSD, sshd (from OpenSSH 9.1p1) will not accept new connections until it is restarted.
 After installing the new userland, either reboot (as specified in the source update procedure), or execute `service sshd restart`.
-====
 
 [[late-news]]
 == Late-Breaking News



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