Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:42:45 GMT From: keramida@FreeBSD.org To: gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr, keramida@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org, keramida@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/119463: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200801141342.m0EDgjCB069055@freefall.freebsd.org>
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Synopsis: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: keramida State-Changed-When: Mon Jan 14 13:40:59 UTC 2008 State-Changed-Why: Hi Gregory, I reworded the text of the peragraph a bit, to avoid the need for a ';' separating two sub-sentences. The new text is shown below: - <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability; - that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in - read-write mode.</para> + <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability. + When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application> + opens the printer in read-write mode.</para> Does this look better? Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida Responsible-Changed-By: keramida Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Jan 14 13:40:59 UTC 2008 Responsible-Changed-Why: I'll handle this PR, if Gregory wants to make more changes. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=119463
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