Date: Tue, 30 Oct 2012 15:09:25 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39862 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq Message-ID: <201210301509.q9UF9P2L016721@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Tue Oct 30 15:09:25 2012 New Revision: 39862 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39862 Log: Fix style problems pointed out by igor w.r.t. "e.g." or "i.e.". No checking for the remainder of the content was done. Translators may ignore. Approved by: bcr (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Tue Oct 30 14:30:49 2012 (r39861) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Tue Oct 30 15:09:25 2012 (r39862) @@ -1258,7 +1258,7 @@ floppy, track for track, and is not meant to be placed on the floppy as a regular file. You have to transfer it to the floppy <quote>raw</quote>, using the low-level - tools (e.g. <command>fdimage</command> or + tools (e.g., <command>fdimage</command> or <command>rawrite</command>) described in the <ulink url="&url.books.handbook;/install.html">installation guide to &os;</ulink>. </para> @@ -1351,7 +1351,7 @@ <guimenuitem>Partition</guimenuitem>. Select the drive which used to contain your boot manager (likely the first one) and when you come to the partition editor for - it, as the very first thing (e.g. do not make any + it, as the very first thing (e.g., do not make any changes) press <keycap>W</keycap>. This will ask for confirmation, select &gui.yes;, and when you get the Boot Manager selection prompt, be sure to select the @@ -2809,8 +2809,8 @@ quit</programlisting> on the processor might have died. In either case you need to ensure that you have hardware running at what it is specified to run at, at least while trying to solve - this problem. i.e. Clock it back to the default - settings.</para> + this problem (in other words, clock it back to the default + settings.)</para> <para>If you are overclocking then note that it is far cheaper to have a slow system than a fried system that @@ -3409,7 +3409,7 @@ chip1@pci0:31:5: class=0x040100 c <para>Break the warnings by changing the value of <varname>MAX_STRAY_LOG</varname> from <literal>5</literal> to <literal>0</literal> in your - platform's (e.g. &i386;) + platform's (e.g., &i386;) <filename>intr_machdep.c</filename> file and rebuild the new kernel and all the warnings will be suppressed.</para> @@ -4633,7 +4633,7 @@ kern.sched.name: ULE</screen> &os; lists your disks, first IDE, then SCSI.</para> <para>When you are slicing up your disk, check that the disk - geometry displayed in the FDISK screen is correct (ie. it + geometry displayed in the FDISK screen is correct (i.e., it matches the BIOS numbers); if it is wrong, use the <keycap>G</keycap> key to fix it. You may have to do this if there is absolutely nothing on the disk, or if the disk @@ -5007,7 +5007,7 @@ C:\="DOS"</programlisting> following to your configuration file <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> (or <filename>/boot/grub/grub.conf</filename> in some systems, - e.g. Red Hat Linux and its derivatives).</para> + e.g., Red Hat Linux and its derivatives).</para> <programlisting>title &os; 6.1 root <replaceable>(hd0,a)</replaceable> @@ -7556,7 +7556,7 @@ Key F15 A A Menu Wo <para>The most common way to accomplish this is to build a simulated environment in a subdirectory and then run the - processes in that directory chroot'd (i.e. <filename + processes in that directory chroot'd (i.e., <filename class="directory">/</filename> for that process is this directory, not the real <filename class="directory">/</filename> of the system).</para> @@ -10110,7 +10110,7 @@ panic: page fault</programlisting> <answer> <para>By default, the kernel address space is 1 GB (2 GB for PAE) for i386. If you run a - network-intensive server (e.g. a large FTP or HTTP server), + network-intensive server (e.g., a FTP or HTTP server), or you want to use ZFS, you might find that is not enough.</para>
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