Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2017 16:57:44 -0800 (PST) From: "Rodney W. Grimes" <freebsd-rwg@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> To: "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> Cc: Hiroki Sato <hrs@freebsd.org>, svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers <src-committers@freebsd.org>, ngie@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r314585 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd Message-ID: <201703040057.v240vi0H073583@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> In-Reply-To: <E29138D5-DA68-417A-B507-8F89748842FE@gmail.com>
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-- Start of PGP signed section. [ Charset UTF-8 unsupported, converting... ] > > > On Mar 3, 2017, at 05:56, Rodney W. Grimes <freebsd-rwg@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> wrote: > > > > -- Start of PGP signed section. > > [ Charset ISO-8859-7 unsupported, converting... ] > >> "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> wrote > >> in <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com>: > >> > >> ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or > > > > I actually think this right here is the clearest one of all the ones > > I have seen attempted. Oh, remove the s from accepts. > > How about this instead (it incorporates hrs?s suggestion and your?s)? > Thanks, > -Ngie > > $ svn diff syslogd.8 > Index: syslogd.8 > =================================================================== > --- syslogd.8 (revision 314626) > +++ syslogd.8 (working copy) > @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ > .Ar service > of > .Ql \&* > -allows packets to be received from any UDP port. > +accept UDP packets from any source port. > The default > .Ar service > is > -- End of PGP section, PGP failed! I think that is probably as clear as you can get on this in one line. -- Rod Grimes rgrimes@freebsd.org
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