Date: Sun, 3 Jul 2005 19:09:20 +0200 (CEST) From: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article Message-ID: <20050703170920.E992A1CD4C@mail.rulez.sk> Resent-Message-ID: <200507031710.j63HAAHC078070@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 82935 >Category: www >Synopsis: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Jul 03 17:10:09 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Daniel Gerzo >Release: FreeBSD 5.4 i386 >Organization: rulez.sk >Environment: System: FreeBSD daemon.rulez.sk #2: Fri May 27 23:16:31 CEST 2005 danger@daemon.rulez.sk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/daemon i386 >Description: The doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.sgml doesn't use proper english. I have also included little update for this article. >How-To-Repeat: check out: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.html >Fix: --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ <ulink url="http://gerda.univie.ac.at/freebsd-laptops/">The &os; Laptop Compatibility List</ulink>.</para> - <para>For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out - the &a.mobile.name; list.</para> + <para>If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional + information about using Laptops on &os; at + <ulink url="http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html">; + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html</ulink>.</para>; <sect1> <title>&xorg;</title> --- article.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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