Date: Wed, 15 Nov 2017 10:58:23 +0000 From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 223679] Minor Style Guide Violation in Section 8.8 of FAQ Message-ID: <bug-223679-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/>
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=223679 Bug ID: 223679 Summary: Minor Style Guide Violation in Section 8.8 of FAQ Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Only Me Priority: --- Component: Documentation Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Reporter: mikepagano113@gmail.com Created attachment 188012 --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=188012&action=edit This is a diff file fixing this bug. Section 8.8 of the FAQ features the word "you" to direct the user. This is incorrect form. https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/disks.html#idp59472104 The original line read "You can then boot LILO from BootEasy." However, a better way to express the line would be "Then boot LILO from BootEasy." -- You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.help
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