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Date:      Mon, 23 Mar 1998 14:06:22 -0800
From:      Studded <Studded@dal.net>
To:        "Jordan K. Hubbard" <jkh@FreeBSD.ORG>, Docs Team <FreeBSD-Doc@FreeBSD.ORG>
Subject:   [Fwd: Handbook nits (relnotes.sgml) (fwd)]
Message-ID:  <3516DCDE.565808B9@dal.net>

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I don't think this went through the first time.

Doug
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Date: Mon, 23 Mar 1998 12:48:05 -0800 (PST)
From: Studded <Studded@dal.net>
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Subject: Handbook nits (relnotes.sgml) (fwd)
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	Here's a patch to correct some small technical inaccuracies, style
nits, etc. in relnotes.sgml. More changes might be desirable, however
these were the things that leapt out at me.

Doug

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--- relnotes.sgml.Dist	Mon Mar 23 11:51:50 1998
+++ relnotes.sgml	Mon Mar 23 12:29:41 1998
@@ -8,17 +8,17 @@
       <sect><heading>About the Current Release<label id="relnotes"></heading>
 
 	<p>FreeBSD is a freely available, full source 4.4BSD-Lite
-	  based release for Intel i386/i486/Pentium/PentiumPro (or
-	  compatible) based PC's.  It is based primarily on
+	  based release for Intel i386/i486/Pentium/PentiumPro/Pentium II
+	  (or compatible) based PC's.  It is based primarily on
 	  software from U.C. Berkeley's CSRG group, with some
-	  enhancements from NetBSD, 386BSD, and the Free Software
-	  Foundation.
+	  enhancements from NetBSD, OpenBSD, 386BSD, and the Free 
+	  Software Foundation.
 
 	  Since our release of FreeBSD 2.0 in January of 95, the
 	  performance, feature set, and stability of FreeBSD has
 	  improved dramatically.  The largest change is a
-	  revamped VM system with a merged VM/file buffer cache
-	  that not only increases performance, but reduces
+	  revamped virtual memory system with a merged VM/file buffer 
+	  cache that not only increases performance, but reduces
 	  FreeBSD's memory footprint, making a 5MB configuration
 	  a more acceptable minimum.  Other enhancements include
 	  full NIS client and server support, transaction TCP
@@ -36,20 +36,20 @@
 
 	  In addition to the base distributions, FreeBSD offers a
 	  new ported software collection with hundreds of commonly
-	  sought-after programs. At the beginning of July 97 there were
-	  more than 1000 ports ! The list of ports ranges from
+	  sought-after programs. At the end of March 1998 there were
+	  more than 1300 ports! The list of ports ranges from
 	  http (WWW) servers, to games, languages, editors and
 	  almost everything in between. The entire ports collection
-	  requires only 10MB of storage, all ports being expressed
-	  as ``deltas'' to their original sources.  This makes it
-	  much easier for us to update ports, and greatly reduces
+	  requires approximately 26MB of storage, all ports being 
+	  expressed as ``deltas'' to their original sources.  This makes 
+	  it much easier for us to update ports, and greatly reduces
 	  the disk space demands made by the older 1.0 ports
 	  collection.  To compile a port, you simply change to the
 	  directory of the program you wish to install, type ``make
 	  all'' followed by ``make install'' after successful
 	  compilation and let the system do the rest.  The full
 	  original distribution for each port you build is retrieved
-	  dynamically off of CDROM or a local ftp site, so you need
+	  dynamically off the CDROM or a local ftp site, so you need
 	  only enough disk space to build the ports you want.
 	  (Almost) every port is also provided as a pre-compiled
 	  "package" which can be installed with a simple command
@@ -60,8 +60,8 @@
 	  very helpful in the process of installing and using
 	  FreeBSD may now also be found in the
 	  <bf>/usr/share/doc</bf> directory on any machine running
-	  FreeBSD 2.1 or later.  You may view the
-	  manuals with any HTML capable browser with the
+	  FreeBSD 2.1 or later.  You may view the locally installed
+	  manuals with any HTML capable browser using the
 	  following URLs:
 
 	  <descrip>




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