Date: Mon, 11 Feb 2013 21:09:05 -0500 (EST) From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r40942 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics Message-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302111957430.9389@multics.mit.edu> In-Reply-To: <201302111346.r1BDkQXD012859@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201302111346.r1BDkQXD012859@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Mon, 11 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote: > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml Mon Feb 11 13:46:24 2013 (r40941) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml Mon Feb 11 13:46:26 2013 (r40942) > @@ -135,17 +134,17 @@ DECLARE_MODULE(skeleton, skel_mod, SI_SU > <sect2> > <title>Makefile</title> > > - <para>FreeBSD provides a makefile include that you can use to > - quickly compile your kernel addition.</para> > + <para>FreeBSD provides a makefile include to > + quickly compile a kernel addition.</para> This sentence does not seem right -- the user compiles the module, not the include file. I think these .mk files are referred to as "system makefiles", anyway. The best I can do on short notice is: "FreeBSD provides a system makefile to simplify compiling a kernel module." > <programlisting>SRCS=skeleton.c > KMOD=skeleton > > @@ -201,8 +200,8 @@ KMOD=skeleton > the source tree.</para> > > <para>This simple example pseudo-device remembers whatever values > - you write to it and can then supply them back to you when you > - read from it.</para> > + that are written to it and can then echo them back when > + read.</para> "whatever values that are written to it" doesn't seem right; "whatever values are written to it" feels much better. -Ben > <example> > <title>Example of a Sample Echo Pseudo-Device Driver for
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