Date: Mon, 15 Sep 2003 09:49:42 +0200 From: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> To: Hiten Pandya <hmp@nxad.com> Cc: doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: Big Patch Commit Message-ID: <20030915074941.GA393@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20030914235034.GA19994@perrin.nxad.com>
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On 2003.09.14 16:50:34 -0700, Hiten Pandya wrote:
> I am planning to commit the patch in PR docs/55226.
> If anyone has objections towards, speak now, or forever hold
> your peace. :-)
Not really objections, but you need to have a look at each change. At
least one is IMO wrong:
--- advanced-networking/chapter.sgml 21 Jul 2003 13:35:50 -0000 1.234
+++ advanced-networking/chapter.sgml 2 Aug 2003 13:26:43 -0000
@@ -2798,7 +2798,7 @@
group of machines it represents. For example, the Art
- department at Acme Inc. might be in the
+ department at Acme Inc. might be in the
<quote>acme-art</quote> NIS domain. For this example,
I also think that the changes that add to "FreeBSD 4.8" and so
on, might as well change FreeBSD to &os; when your are changing the
lines anyway.
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Simon L. Nielsen
FreeBSD Documentation Team
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