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Date:      Wed, 28 Oct 2015 13:40:41 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Mathieu Arnold <mat@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r47693 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading
Message-ID:  <201510281340.t9SDefKt075845@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: mat
Date: Wed Oct 28 13:40:40 2015
New Revision: 47693
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47693

Log:
  Whitespace, indentation, translators can ignore.
  
  Noticed by:	igor
  Sponsored by:	Absolight

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml	Wed Oct 28 00:53:13 2015	(r47692)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml	Wed Oct 28 13:40:40 2015	(r47693)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
   <para>When a port is not the most recent version available from the
     authors, update the local working copy of
-    <filename>/usr/ports</filename>. The port might have already been
+    <filename>/usr/ports</filename>.  The port might have already been
     updated to the new version.</para>
 
   <para>When working with more than a few ports, it will probably be
@@ -24,13 +24,13 @@
     dependencies.</para>
 
   <para>The next step is to see if there is an update already pending.
-    To do this, there are two options.  There is a searchable interface
-    to the <link
-      xlink:href="https://bugs.freebsd.org/search/">FreeBSD
-      Problem Report (PR) or bug database</link>.
-    Select <literal>Ports Tree</literal> in
-    the <literal>Product</literal> dropdown, and enter the name of the port in the
-    <literal>Summary</literal> field.</para>
+    To do this, there are two options.  There is a searchable
+    interface to the <link
+      xlink:href="https://bugs.freebsd.org/search/">FreeBSD Problem
+      Report (PR) or bug database</link>.  Select <literal>Ports
+      Tree</literal> in the <literal>Product</literal> dropdown, and
+    enter the name of the port in the <literal>Summary</literal>
+    field.</para>
 
   <para>However, sometimes people forget to put the name of the port
     into the Summary field in an unambiguous fashion.  In that
@@ -62,9 +62,10 @@
 
   <para>To create a suitable <command>diff</command> for a single
     patch, copy the file that needs patching to
-    <filename><replaceable>something</replaceable>.orig</filename>, save the changes to
-    <filename><replaceable>something</replaceable></filename> and then create the
-    patch:</para>
+    <filename><replaceable>something</replaceable>.orig</filename>,
+    save the changes to
+    <filename><replaceable>something</replaceable></filename> and then
+    create the patch:</para>
 
   <informalexample>
     <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>diff -u <replaceable>something</replaceable>.orig <replaceable>something</replaceable> &gt; something.diff</userinput></screen>
@@ -187,8 +188,8 @@
       <callout arearefs="svn-FreeBSD-org">
 	<para><link
 	    xlink:href="https://svn.FreeBSD.org/">svn.FreeBSD.org</link>;
-	  is the &os; public <application>Subversion</application> server.
-	  See <link
+	  is the &os; public <application>Subversion</application>
+	  server.  See <link
 	    xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/svn.html#svn-mirrors">Subversion
 	    mirror sites</link> for more information.</para>
       </callout>
@@ -297,87 +298,89 @@
     <sect2 xml:id="moved-and-updating-updating">
       <title><filename>/usr/ports/UPDATING</filename></title>
 
-    <para>If upgrading the port requires special steps like
-      changing configuration files or running a specific program,
-      it must be documented in this file.  The format of
-      an entry in this file is as follows:</para>
+      <para>If upgrading the port requires special steps like
+	changing configuration files or running a specific program,
+	it must be documented in this file.  The format of
+	an entry in this file is as follows:</para>
 
-    <programlisting>YYYYMMDD:
+      <programlisting>YYYYMMDD:
   AFFECTS: users of portcategory/portname
   AUTHOR: Your name &lt;Your email address&gt;
 
   Special instructions</programlisting>
 
-    <tip>
-      <para>When including exact
-	<application>portmaster</application>,
-	<application>portupgrade</application>, and/or
-	<application>pkg</application> instructions, please make sure
-	to get the shell escaping right.  For example, do
-	<emphasis>not</emphasis> use:</para>
-
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg delete -g -f docbook-xml* docbook-sk* docbook[2345]??-* docbook-4*</userinput></screen>
-
-      <para>As shown, the command will only work with
-	<application>bourne shells</application>.  Instead, use the
-	form shown below, which will work with both
-	<application>bourne shell</application> and
-	<application>c-shell</application>:</para>
-
-      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg delete -g -f docbook-xml\* docbook-sk\* docbook\[2345\]\?\?-\* docbook-4\*</userinput></screen>
-   </tip>
-
-    <note>
-      <para>It is recommended that the AFFECTS line contains a glob
-	matching all the ports affected by the entry so that automated
-	tools can parse it as easily as possible.  If an update
-	concerns all the existing <application>BIND 9</application>
-	versions the <literal>AFFECTS</literal> content must be
-	<literal>users of dns/bind9*</literal>, it must
-	<emphasis>not</emphasis> be <literal>users of BIND
-	  9</literal></para>
-    </note>
+      <tip>
+	<para>When including exact
+	  <application>portmaster</application>,
+	  <application>portupgrade</application>, and/or
+	  <application>pkg</application> instructions, please make
+	  sure
+	  to get the shell escaping right.  For example, do
+	  <emphasis>not</emphasis> use:</para>
+
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg delete -g -f docbook-xml* docbook-sk* docbook[2345]??-* docbook-4*</userinput></screen>
+
+	<para>As shown, the command will only work with
+	  <application>bourne shells</application>.  Instead, use the
+	  form shown below, which will work with both
+	  <application>bourne shell</application> and
+	  <application>c-shell</application>:</para>
+
+	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg delete -g -f docbook-xml\* docbook-sk\* docbook\[2345\]\?\?-\* docbook-4\*</userinput></screen>
+      </tip>
+
+      <note>
+	<para>It is recommended that the AFFECTS line contains a glob
+	  matching all the ports affected by the entry so that
+	  automated tools can parse it as easily as possible.  If an
+	  update concerns all the existing <application>BIND
+	    9</application> versions the <literal>AFFECTS</literal>
+	  content must be <literal>users of dns/bind9*</literal>, it
+	  must <emphasis>not</emphasis> be <literal>users of BIND
+	    9</literal></para>
+      </note>
 
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="moved-and-updating-moved">
       <title><filename>/usr/ports/MOVED</filename></title>
 
-    <para>This file is used to
-      list moved or removed ports.  Each line in the file is made
-      up of the name of the port, where the port was moved, when,
-      and why.  If the port was removed, the section detailing where
-      it was moved can be left blank.  Each section must be
-      separated by the <literal>|</literal> (pipe) character, like
-      so:</para>
-
-    <programlisting>old name|new name (blank for deleted)|date of move|reason</programlisting>
-
-    <para>The date must be entered in the form
-      <literal>YYYY-MM-DD</literal>.  New entries are added to
-      the top of the file to keep it in reverse chronological order,
-      with the last entry first.</para>
-
-    <para>If a port was removed but has since been restored,
-      delete the line in this file that states that it was
-      removed.</para>
-
-    <para>If a port was renamed and then renamed back to its original
-      name, add a new one with the intermediate name to the
-      old name, and remove the old entry as to not create a
-      loop.</para>
-
-    <note>
-      <para>Any changes must be validated with
-	<command>Tools/scripts/MOVEDlint.awk</command>.</para>
-
-      <para>If using a ports directory other than <filename>/usr/ports</filename>, use:</para>
-
-      <informalexample>
-	<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd <replaceable>/home/user/ports</replaceable></userinput>
-&prompt.user; <userinput>env PORTSDIR=$PWD Tools/scripts/MOVEDlint.awk</userinput></screen>
-      </informalexample>
-    </note>
+      <para>This file is used to
+	list moved or removed ports.  Each line in the file is made
+	up of the name of the port, where the port was moved, when,
+	and why.  If the port was removed, the section detailing where
+	it was moved can be left blank.  Each section must be
+	separated by the <literal>|</literal> (pipe) character, like
+	so:</para>
+
+      <programlisting>old name|new name (blank for deleted)|date of move|reason</programlisting>
+
+      <para>The date must be entered in the form
+	<literal>YYYY-MM-DD</literal>.  New entries are added to
+	the top of the file to keep it in reverse chronological order,
+	with the last entry first.</para>
+
+      <para>If a port was removed but has since been restored,
+	delete the line in this file that states that it was
+	removed.</para>
+
+      <para>If a port was renamed and then renamed back to its
+	original name, add a new one with the intermediate name to the
+	old name, and remove the old entry as to not create a
+	loop.</para>
+
+      <note>
+	<para>Any changes must be validated with
+	  <command>Tools/scripts/MOVEDlint.awk</command>.</para>
+
+	<para>If using a ports directory other than
+	  <filename>/usr/ports</filename>, use:</para>
+
+	<informalexample>
+	  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd <replaceable>/home/user/ports</replaceable></userinput>
+  &prompt.user; <userinput>env PORTSDIR=$PWD Tools/scripts/MOVEDlint.awk</userinput></screen>
+	</informalexample>
+      </note>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 </chapter>



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