Date: Fri, 17 Jul 2015 15:38:02 +0000 (UTC) From: Christian Brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r47007 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status Message-ID: <201507171538.t6HFc2bh049022@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: brueffer Date: Fri Jul 17 15:38:01 2015 New Revision: 47007 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47007 Log: Fix typos and grammar; spell FreeBSD in email addresses consistently. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Fri Jul 17 14:50:55 2015 (r47006) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-04-2015-06.xml Fri Jul 17 15:38:01 2015 (r47007) @@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ back in sync with their English reference chapters: filesystems and ZFS. The former was mainly done by Björn Heidotting as part of his mentee process. The latter was done - by Benedict Reuschling, which valuable corrections by + by Benedict Reuschling, with valuable corrections by Björn.</p> <p>Additionally, we updated many of our translation markers from @@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ </links> <body> - <p>The aim of this project is to design and implement a + <p>The aim of this project is to design and implement an infrastructure to validate that a number of the network stack's multiqueue behaviours are as expected.</p> @@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ Release Engineering tools now natively support producing &os;/arm images without external build tools.</p> - <p>At present, the build tools are support building &os;/arm + <p>At present, the build tools support building &os;/arm images for:</p> <ul> @@ -917,7 +917,7 @@ <p>During this period we had two new commit bits awarded, and one taken in for safekeeping. Welcome aboard to Chris Torek - and Mariusz Zeborski, and we were very sorry indeed to see + and Mariusz Zaborski, and we were very sorry indeed to see Steve Kargl decide to call it a day.</p> </body> </project> @@ -1166,7 +1166,7 @@ movement using the hardware offload capabilities of Mellanox's 10, 40, 56 and 100 Gigabit IB/Ethernet adapters.</p> - <p>Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA) have been shown to have a + <p>Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA) has been shown to have a great value for storage applications. RDMA infrastructure provides benefits such as Zero-Copy, CPU offload, Reliable transport, Fabric consolidation, and many more. The iSER @@ -1230,7 +1230,7 @@ boot with a temporary rootfs, configure the kernel to be able to access the real rootfs, and then replace the temporary root with the real one. In Linux, the functionality is known as - <tt>pivot_root</tt>. The reroot projects aims to provide + <tt>pivot_root</tt>. The reroot project aims to provide similar functionality in a different, slightly more user-friendly way: rerooting. Simply put, from the user point of view it looks like the system performs a partial shutdown, @@ -1789,7 +1789,7 @@ <given>Alexander</given> <common>Motin</common> </name> - <email>mav@freebsd.org</email> + <email>mav@FreeBSD.org</email> </person> <person> @@ -1797,7 +1797,7 @@ <given>Marcelo</given> <common>Araujo</common> </name> - <email>araujo@freebsd.org</email> + <email>araujo@FreeBSD.org</email> </person> </contact> @@ -1994,7 +1994,7 @@ <body> <p>This is a kernel driver implemetation of the Dallas Semiconductor 1-Wire bus in a generic fashion. While - temperature sensors are the only device initially supported, + temperature sensors are the only devices initially supported, other devices should be easy to add. Multiple devices on one bus are supported. Both normal and overdrive modes are supported.</p> @@ -2003,7 +2003,7 @@ there is a high bit error rate. There are indications that this is due to bad bit-read times. The code is written with enough resilience to cope with the problem by retrying, and - the error rate is low enough that a couple of retries papers + the error rate is low enough that a couple of retries paper over many marginal issues.</p> </body>
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