Date: Fri, 3 Apr 2015 14:43:26 -0400 From: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org> To: John Baldwin <jhb@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r46400 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall Message-ID: <CAF6rxgmcBYeaaEJgDXG1smHFTVzEW-iQm4eB%2BZH9z2kuUkZL5Q@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <2293373.FuObg3DdlU@ralph.baldwin.cx> References: <201504010508.t3158WPX043648@svn.freebsd.org> <2293373.FuObg3DdlU@ralph.baldwin.cx>
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On 3 April 2015 at 12:51, John Baldwin <jhb@freebsd.org> wrote: > On Wednesday, April 01, 2015 05:08:32 AM Eitan Adler wrote: >> Author: eadler >> Date: Wed Apr 1 05:08:31 2015 >> New Revision: 46400 >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46400 >> >> Log: >> Minimum Hardware Requirements: installation instructions >> >> Sacrifice some technical pedanticness to simplify the description of amd64 and >> i386. For the users whom are actually confused as to which system they should >> use, using more plain language (such as 32-bit vs 64-bit) and referencing the >> vendors directly would be more helpful. >> >> Also, stop mentioning that both UP and SMP are supported. OpenBSD finished that >> project in 2004. > > Mostly looks good, some nits: ... Excellent. I've implemented your suggestions in r46452. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams
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