Date: Mon, 14 Jul 2008 10:32:31 +0200 (CEST) From: "Remko Lodder" <remko@elvandar.org> To: "Ganbold" <ganbold@micom.mng.net> Cc: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org>, doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml Message-ID: <cf2972980716a1f4b483aa594ba29ae4.squirrel@galain.elvandar.org> In-Reply-To: <487B096D.3050802@micom.mng.net> References: <200807131823.m6DINv82033146@repoman.freebsd.org> <487B096D.3050802@micom.mng.net>
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On Mon, July 14, 2008 10:08 am, Ganbold wrote: > Tom Rhodes wrote: >> trhodes 2008-07-13 18:23:57 UTC >> >> FreeBSD doc repository >> >> Modified files: >> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml >> Log: >> Rewrite the IPsec section to bring it up to date and make it easier to >> get a VPN up and running. While here, remove discussion on FAST_IPSEC >> since it's no longer a valid kernel option. >> >> PR: 121863 >> Quick review by: remko >> >> Revision Changes Path >> 1.324 +293 -829 >> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml >> _______________________________________________ >> cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list >> http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all >> To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >> >> >> >> > Tom, > > I think you meant: > > <para>At this point, both networks should be available and > seem to be part of the same network. Most likely both > networks are protected by a firewall, as they should be. To > - allow traffic to flow between them, rules need to be added > + allow traffic flow between them, rules need to be added > > Maybe I'm wrong here. > > thanks, > > Ganbold I think the current line is right. "Traffic to flow" means that it "can happen", traffic flow means that it happends... Cheers remko -- /"\ Best regards, | remko@FreeBSD.org \ / Remko Lodder | remko@EFnet X http://www.evilcoder.org/ | / \ ASCII Ribbon Campaign | Against HTML Mail and News
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