Date: Fri, 03 Mar 2017 16:57:18 +0900 (JST) From: Hiroki Sato <hrs@FreeBSD.org> To: yaneurabeya@gmail.com Cc: ngie@FreeBSD.org, src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r314585 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd Message-ID: <20170303.165718.447567964094984094.hrs@allbsd.org> In-Reply-To: <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com> References: <20170303.154955.607107599855581369.hrs@allbsd.org> <3B6DBB8E-B9AF-46DF-BDEA-9D51DF132BA6@gmail.com> <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> wrote in <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com>: ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or ya> >> something? ya> > ya> > Yeah, that¢s more accurate. ya> ya> How about this? ya> -Ngie ya> ya> $ svn diff usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 ya> Index: usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 ya> =================================================================== ya> --- usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 (revision 314585) ya> +++ usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8 (working copy) ya> @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ ya> .Ar service ya> of ya> .Ql \&* ya> -allows packets to be received from any UDP port. ya> +allows UDP packets to be sent with any source port. ya> The default ya> .Ar service ya> is Looks good to me though probably I am not the best person who can judge an English expression as good or bad... -- Hiroki [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1 iEYEABECAAYFAli5Id4ACgkQTyzT2CeTzy1mDACgiZE8gKIveLO5nnkRYermnWlQ VtsAoL2E5pCP3QnFYa3Avx4L3ciMs5E1 =sYf+ -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----
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