Date: Fri, 28 Sep 2001 09:56:21 -0700 From: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@FreeBSD.ORG> To: Tom Hukins <tom@FreeBSD.ORG> Cc: doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: Please review: NTP section for Handbook Message-ID: <200109281656.f8SGuL270421@c527597-a.cstvl1.sfba.home.com> In-Reply-To: <20010928172412.A50276@eborcom.com> References: <20010928172412.A50276@eborcom.com>
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--==_Exmh_-1091126619P Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii If memory serves me right, Tom Hukins wrote: > I've put together some information which I hope can be incorporated > into the "Advanced Networking" section, and I'd appreciate feedback > before I commit anything. Hi Tom-- Just skimmed over this very quickly. A few comments... 1. I can't find anyplace where you've actually expanded "NTP" into "Network Time Protocol"...that might be helpful for people who have never heard of NTP before. 2. I would mark up the first word in the "temporary Internet connection" section as &man.ntpd.8; instead of <command>ntpd</command>. 3. I would mark up the variables in /etc/rc.conf with <varname></varname> instead of <literal></literal>. 4. Maybe you could mention something about using &man.ntpdate.8; to step a host's clock into coarse synchronization first, for example via ndpdate_enable in /etc/rc.conf. Overall, nice job! Bruce. --==_Exmh_-1091126619P Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.6 (FreeBSD) Comment: Exmh version 2.3.1+ 05/14/2001 iD8DBQE7tKu12MoxcVugUsMRAgzZAKClmk4mG+Eja9NfjsLPuYXox/DjbQCfTsk5 PFb3HAMQXzawU1YIazP4P84= =/hY4 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --==_Exmh_-1091126619P-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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