Date: Tue, 14 Jan 2014 00:25:46 +0000 (UTC) From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-releng@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r260615 - releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes Message-ID: <201401140025.s0E0PkuL068585@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: gjb Date: Tue Jan 14 00:25:46 2014 New Revision: 260615 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/260615 Log: Fix various release notes nits. Submitted by: dt71@gmx.com (via -doc@) Approved by: re (implicit) Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation Modified: releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Modified: releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml ============================================================================== --- releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Mon Jan 13 23:48:01 2014 (r260614) +++ releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Tue Jan 14 00:25:46 2014 (r260615) @@ -18,6 +18,7 @@ <!ENTITY man.vmx.4 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>vmx</refentrytitle><manvolnum>4</manvolnum></citerefentry>">; <!ENTITY man.pkg.7 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>pkg</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>">; <!ENTITY man.bhyve.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>bhyve</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">; +<!ENTITY man.gptboot.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>gptboot</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">; <!ENTITY man.bsdconfig.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>bsdconfig</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">; <!ENTITY man.unbound.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>unbound</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">; ]> @@ -202,7 +203,7 @@ <para arch="amd64,i386" revision="240135">Support was added for the new Intel on-CPU Bull Mountain random number generator, found on IvyBridge and supposedly later CPUs, - accessible with RDRAND instruction.</para> + accessible with the RDRAND instruction.</para> <sect3 xml:id="kernel-virtualization"> <title>Virtualization support</title> @@ -229,7 +230,7 @@ hv_netsvc_load="YES" hv_utils_load="YES" hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Alternatively, the Hyper-V drivers can be added to the i386 kernel by adding <literal>device hyperv</literal> to the kernel config, and then - recompiling the kernel. Please refer to: + recompiling the kernel. Please refer to <link xlink:href="http://wiki.freebsd.org/HyperV">FreeBSD and Microsoft Windows Server Hyper-V support</link> for full instructions on how to set up Hyper-V support under FreeBSD.</para> @@ -247,7 +248,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="239922">Raspberry PI support has been added. Refer to these <link xlink:href="http://kernelnomicon.org/?p=164">setup instructions</link> - and <link xlink:href="http://www.raspberrypi.org/quick-start-guide">quick start + and this <link xlink:href="http://www.raspberrypi.org/quick-start-guide">quick start guide</link>.</para> <para revision="253396">The default ABI on ARM is now the ARM EABI. This brings a number of @@ -256,15 +257,15 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="239268">ARM support has been greatly improved, including support for ARMv6 and ARMv7, SMP and thread-local storage (TLS). Additionally support for some newer SoC like the MV78x60 and OMAP4 was added. - See <link xlink:href="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-arm/2012-August/003757.html">this announcement</link> + See the <link xlink:href="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-arm/2012-August/003757.html">announcement</link>; for further details.</para> <para revision="254918">Superpages support on ARM has been added. Superpages support provides improved performance and scalability by allowing TLB translations to dynamically cover large physical memory regions. All ARMv6 and ARMv7-based platforms can take advantage of this feature. - See <link xlink:href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/ARMSuperpages">this page</link> - for further details.</para> + See the <link xlink:href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/ARMSuperpages">ARM Superpages status</link> + page for further details.</para> </sect3> @@ -276,10 +277,10 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al mode. This change makes it possible to boot &os; from USB devices.</para> - <para arch="amd64,i386" role="merged">A new gptboot boot loader has + <para arch="amd64,i386" role="merged">A new &man.gptboot.8; boot loader has been added to support booting from a GPT labeled disk. A new <command>boot</command> command has been added to - &man.gpt.8;, which makes a GPT disk bootable by writing the + &man.gpart.8;, which makes a GPT disk bootable by writing the required bits of the boot loader, creating a new boot partition if required.</para> @@ -291,7 +292,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para role="merged">The &man.cmx.4; driver, a driver for Omnikey CardMan 4040 PCMCIA smartcard readers, has been added.</para> - <para>The &man.syscons.4; driver now supports Colemak keyboard layout.</para> + <para>The &man.syscons.4; driver now supports the Colemak keyboard layout.</para> <para role="merged">The &man.uslcom.4; driver, a driver for Silicon Laboratories CP2101/CP2102-based USB serial adapters, has been @@ -380,13 +381,13 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al address on the subnet (carpdev), switching state with &man.ifconfig.8;, better locking and using modern kernel interfaces to allocate multicast memberships. - Configuration of the CARP protocol via &man.ifconfig.8; has changed, as well as format - of CARP events submitted to &man.devd.8; has changed. See &man.carp.4; + Configuration of the CARP protocol via &man.ifconfig.8; has changed, as well as the format + of CARP events submitted to &man.devd.8;. See &man.carp.4; for more information. The arpbalance feature of &man.carp.4; is currently not supported anymore.</para> <para revision="240233">The &man.pf.4; firewall now supports fine-grain locking - and better utilization on multi-cpu machines resulting in + and better utilization on multi-CPU machines, resulting in significant improvements in performance.</para> <para revision="250700">Support for up to 65536 routing tables has been @@ -417,7 +418,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="240616">&man.nvme.4; has been added and provides NVM Express support. NVM Express is an optimized register interface, command set and feature set of PCI Express (PCIe)-based Solid-State Drives (SSDs). For more information, - see <link xlink:href="http://http://www.nvmexpress.org/">nvmexpress.org</link>.</para>; + see <link xlink:href="http://www.nvmexpress.org/">nvmexpress.org</link>.</para>; </sect3> @@ -449,7 +450,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="240868">TRIM support has been added for ZFS.</para> - <para revision="246586">Support for the high performance LZ4 compression algorithm + <para revision="246586">Support for the high-performance LZ4 compression algorithm has been added to ZFS. LZ4 is usually faster and can achieve a higher compression ratio than LZJB, the default compression algorithm.</para> @@ -458,13 +459,11 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="243524">The zio nop-write improvement from Illumos was imported into &os;. To reduce I/O, nop-write skips overwriting - data if the checksum (cryptographically secure) of new data + data if the (cryptographically secure) checksum of new data matches the checksum of existing data. It also saves space if - snapshots are in use. This improvement only works only on + snapshots are in use. This improvement only works on datasets with enabled compression, disabled deduplication and - sha256 checksums.</para> - - <para>ZFS will now compare the checksums of incoming writes to + sha256 checksums. ZFS will now compare the checksums of incoming writes to the checksum of the existing on-disk data and avoid issuing any write I/O for data that has not changed. This will reduce I/O as well as space usage because if the old block is referenced @@ -481,7 +480,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <title>Userland Changes</title> <para revision="255321">On platforms where &man.clang.1; is the default - system compiler, (such as i386, amd64, arm) GCC and GNU libstdc++ are no + system compiler (such as i386, amd64, arm), GCC and GNU libstdc++ are no longer built by default. &man.clang.1; and libc++ from LLVM are used on these platforms by instead. GCC 4.2.1 and libstdc++ are still built and used by default on pc98 and all other platforms where &man.clang.1; @@ -491,10 +490,10 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="251662">&man.clang.1; and llvm have been updated to version 3.3 release. Please refer to <link xlink:href="http://llvm.org/releases/3.3/tools/clang/docs/ReleaseNotes.html">; - Clang 3.3 Release Notes.</link></para> + Clang 3.3 Release Notes</link>.</para> <para role="merged" revision="255949">BIND has been replaced by &man.unbound.8; for - local dns resolution in the base system. With this change, nslookup + local DNS resolution in the base system. With this change, nslookup and dig are no longer a part of the base system. Users should instead use &man.host.1; and &man.drill.1; Alternatively, nslookup and dig can be obtained by installing the @@ -520,17 +519,17 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al This brings bison compatibilities to &man.yacc.1; while preserving full backwards compatibility with previous version of &man.yacc.1;.</para> - <para revision="250881">&man.lex.1; has been replaced by flex 2.5.37</para> + <para revision="250881">&man.lex.1; has been replaced by flex 2.5.37.</para> <para revision="250699">&man.make.1; has been replaced with the - "Portable" BSD make tool (bmake) from NetBSD.</para> + <quote>Portable</quote> BSD make tool (bmake) from NetBSD.</para> <para role="merged">The &man.adduser.8; utility now supports a <option>-M</option> option to set the mode of a new user's home directory.</para> <para>BSD-licensed versions of &man.ar.1; and &man.ranlib.1;, - based on <filename>libarchive</filename>, have replaced the GNU + based on &man.libarchive.3;, have replaced the GNU Binutils versions of these utilities.</para> <para>BSD-licensed versions of &man.bc.1; and &man.dc.1; have @@ -546,7 +545,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al specifying the <option>-RrP</option> flags.</para> <para>BSD-licensed version of &man.cpio.1; based on - <filename>libarchive</filename>, has replaced the GNU cpio. + &man.libarchive.3;, has replaced the GNU cpio. Note that the GNU cpio is still installed as <filename>gcpio</filename>.</para> @@ -558,7 +557,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para>The &man.fdopendir.3; library function has been added.</para> - <para role="merged">The &man.fetch.3; library now support HTTP 1.1 + <para role="merged">The &man.fetch.3; library now supports HTTP 1.1 If-Modified-Since behavior. The &man.fetch.1; program now supports <option>-i <replaceable>filename</replaceable></option> which will only download the specified HTTP URL if the content @@ -596,7 +595,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para>&man.sh.1; has many bug fixes, some new features, and will now refuse to parse some invalid scripts. Additionally, it now - has filename completion and defaults to the "emacs" editing + has filename completion and defaults to the <quote>emacs</quote> editing mode.</para> <para>The &man.split.1; utility now supports a <option>-n</option> @@ -610,7 +609,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <option>--numeric-owner</option> flag to ignore user/group names on create and extract.</para> - <para>The &man.tar.1; utility now supports an + <para>The &man.tar.1; utility now supports the <option>-S</option> flag to sparsify files on extraction.</para> <para>The &man.tar.1; utility now supports a <option>-s</option> @@ -625,7 +624,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para>&man.top.1; now supports a <option>-P</option> flag to provide per-CPU usage statistics.</para> - <para>&man.zdump.8; is now working properly on 64 bit architectures. + <para>&man.zdump.8; is now working properly on 64-bit architectures. </para> <para>&man.traceroute.8; now has the ability to print the AS @@ -747,18 +746,18 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para role="merged"><application>AMD</application> has been updated from 6.0.10 to 6.1.5.</para> - <para role="merged"><application>awk</application> has been updated from 1 May + <para role="merged"><application>awk</application> has been updated from the 1 May 2007 release to the 23 October 2007 release.</para> <para role="merged"><application>bzip2</application> has been updated from 1.0.4 to 1.0.5.</para> <para revision="251794"><application>CVS</application> has been removed from the - base system, but is still available from ports.</para> + base system, but is still available from Ports Collection.</para> <para revision="251886">Subversion has been imported into the base system and is installed as <application>svnlite</application>. <application>svnlite</application> - should only be used for checking out &os; source and committing, and does not + should only be used for checking out the &os; source trees and committing, and does not replace the full Subversion port.</para> <para revision="234449"><application>file</application> has been updated to 5.11.</para> @@ -771,7 +770,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="250592"><application>less</application> has been updated to v458.</para> - <para><application>ncurses</application> has been updated from + <para><application>ncurses</application> has been updated to 5.7-20081102.</para> <para role="merged"><application>OpenSSH</application> has been updated @@ -791,7 +790,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al have been updated from the <application>tzcode2004a</application> release to the <application>tzcode2009h</application> release. If you have upgraded from source or via the &man.freebsd-update.8;, - then please run &man.tzsetup.8; to install a new /etc/localtime. + then please run &man.tzsetup.8; to install a new <filename>/etc/localtime</filename>. </para> <para revision="252726"><application>WPA Supplicant</application> has been @@ -802,7 +801,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="258231" role="merged">&man.nvi.1; has been updated to 2.1.2.</para> - <para revision="254225">&man.nvi.1; supports wide character locales.</para> + <para revision="254225">&man.nvi.1; supports wide-character locales.</para> </sect2> @@ -812,7 +811,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al <para revision="257444">The pkg_add, pkg_create, pkg_delete, pkg_info, pkg_updating, and pkg_version utilities have been removed. &man.pkg.7; must now be used to install binary packages. &man.pkg.7; - is the next generation &os; package manager, also referred to as "pkgng".</para> + is the next generation &os; package manager, also referred to as <quote>pkgng</quote>.</para> </sect2>
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