Date: Tue, 1 Apr 2014 17:37:49 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44407 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization Message-ID: <201404011737.s31Hbndb095022@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Tue Apr 1 17:37:49 2014 New Revision: 44407 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44407 Log: Miscellaneous fixes and spelling corrections. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml Tue Apr 1 17:27:11 2014 (r44406) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml Tue Apr 1 17:37:49 2014 (r44407) @@ -271,9 +271,9 @@ </sect3> </sect2> <!-- -Deactive/hide this section as the instructions in there do NOT work anymore: +Deactivate/hide this section as the instructions in there do NOT work any more: - FreeBSD 7.0 has reached its EOL a long time ago. -- The needed files from www.fsmware.com are not available anymore, as the +- The needed files from www.fsmware.com are not available any more, as the server is dead. So it is impossible to follow the instructions in here. jkois@FreeBSD.org, 2010-06-18 @@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ jkois@FreeBSD.org, 2010-06-18 </step> <step> - <title>Add a menu entry into Grub menu.lst</title> + <title>Add a Menu Entry into Grub <filename>menu.lst</filename></title> <para>Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and add the following lines:</para> @@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ module /boot/vmlinuz-2.6.16.33-xen0 root </step> <step> - <title>Reboot your computer into &xen;</title> + <title>Reboot Your Computer into &xen;</title> <para>First, edit <filename>/etc/xen/xend-config.sxp</filename>, and add @@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ Domain-0 </sect3> <sect3> - <title>&os; 7-CURRENT domU</title> + <title>&os; 7-CURRENT <emphasis>domU</emphasis></title> <para>Download the &os; domU kernel for <application>&xen; 3.0</application> and disk image from @@ -413,8 +413,7 @@ extra += ",boot_single" extra += ",kern.hz=100" extra += ",vfs.root.mountfrom=ufs:/dev/xbd769a"</programlisting> - <para>The <filename>mdroot-7.0.bz2</filename> file should - be uncompressed.</para> + <para>Uncompress <filename>mdroot-7.0.bz2</filename>.</para> <para>Next, the __xen_guest section in <filename>kernel-current</filename> needs to be altered to @@ -523,7 +522,7 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,M inet 127.0.0.1 netmask 0xff000000 </screen> <para>On dom0 Slackware, some - <application>&xen;</application> dependant network + <application>&xen;</application> dependent network interfaces should show up:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig</userinput>
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