Date: 1 Feb 2002 14:15:29 -0000 From: David "Siebörger" <drs@rucus.ru.ac.za> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/34529: [patch] Grammar nits in usbd.conf(5) and usbd(8) Message-ID: <20020201141529.50693.qmail@foundation.org.za>
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>Number: 34529 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Grammar nits in usbd.conf(5) and usbd(8) >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Feb 01 06:20:01 PST 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: David Siebörger >Release: FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE i386 >Organization: Rhodes University Computer Users Society >Environment: System: FreeBSD bashir.dsl.ru.ac.za 4.5-RELEASE FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE #1: Tue Jan 29 19:22:38 SAST 2002 drs@bashir.dsl.ru.ac.za:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/BASHIR i386 >Description: Fixes for a few grammar mistakes in usbd manual pages. >How-To-Repeat: man 5 usbd.conf man 8 usbd >Fix: --- usr.sbin/usbd/usbd.conf.5.orig Thu Aug 16 17:56:41 2001 +++ usr.sbin/usbd/usbd.conf.5 Fri Feb 1 15:57:51 2002 @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ There are 3 types of fields: descriptive fields, selection criteria and commands to execute on events. -The field name is case sensitive and should be all lower case. +The field names are case sensitive and should be all lower case. Each field can have one or more arguments. .Pp The following fields are available: @@ -74,11 +74,11 @@ .Ar string is an arbitrary string used for pretty printing. .It product Ar id -Product Id +Product ID .It vendor Ar id -Vendor Id +Vendor ID .It release Ar id -Release Id, also called revision Id sometimes. +Release ID, also called revision ID sometimes. .It class Ar id Device Class .It subclass Ar id @@ -156,8 +156,8 @@ .Xr usbd 8 , .Xr usbdevs 8 .Sh BUGS -It is currently not possible to use a selection criterium more than once. For -example it is not possible to specify more than one vendor Id. +It is currently not possible to use a selection criterion more than once. For +example, it is not possible to specify more than one vendor ID. .Sh AUTHORS -The man page for the usbd configuration file was written by +The manual page for the usbd configuration file was written by .An Nick Hibma Aq n_hibma@FreeBSD.org . --- usr.sbin/usbd/usbd.8.orig Thu Aug 16 17:56:41 2001 +++ usr.sbin/usbd/usbd.8 Fri Feb 1 15:57:51 2002 @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Through opening the .Pa /dev/usb0 , .Pa /dev/usb1 , -etc. devices, it enables the kernel to do handle change requests from +etc. devices, it enables the kernel to handle change requests from attached hubs. This functionality will be removed when the kernel has kernel threads. @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ Whenever a device is attached or detached the list of actions read from .Pa /etc/usbd.conf -are searched for a matching entry. +is searched for a matching entry. If found, the corresponding action is executed. .Pp >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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