Date: Mon, 30 Sep 2002 07:07:03 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200209301407.g8UE74Ho023745@freefall.freebsd.org>
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murray 2002/09/30 07:07:03 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml
Log:
Add full stops, remove unnecessary words, use more descriptive markup.
This chapter needs a lot of work.
PR: 43260 (partially)
Submitted by: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
Revision Changes Path
1.91 +23 -20 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
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