Date: Fri, 19 Sep 2014 15:33:36 +0000 (UTC) From: Benjamin Kaduk <bjk@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r45641 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security Message-ID: <201409191533.s8JFXap4081932@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bjk Date: Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014 New Revision: 45641 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45641 Log: Massage some igor fixes to improve grammar and readability Approved by: hrs (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Fri Sep 19 00:14:10 2014 (r45640) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014 (r45641) @@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ </vuln></programlisting> <para>The tag names are supposed to be self-explanatory so we - shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be fill + shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be filled in:</para> <calloutlist> @@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ <literal><le></literal>, <literal><eq></literal>, <literal><ge></literal>, and - <literal><gt></literal> elements. Check the version + <literal><gt></literal> elements. Check that the version ranges given do not overlap.</para> <para>In a range specification, <literal>*</literal> @@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ <sect2 xml:id="security-notify-vuxml-testing"> <title>Testing Changes to the VuXML Database</title> - <para>Assume a new entry for a + <para>This example describes a new entry for a vulnerability in the package <literal>clamav</literal> that has been fixed in version <literal>0.65_7</literal>.</para> @@ -467,7 +467,7 @@ <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>packaudit</userinput></screen> <para>To verify that the <literal><affected></literal> - section of the entry will match correct package(s), issue this + section of the entry will match the correct package(s), issue this command:</para> <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>portaudit -f /usr/ports/INDEX -r <replaceable>uuid</replaceable></userinput></screen>
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