Date: Sat, 29 Sep 2001 02:39:49 +0300 (EEST) From: Giorgos Keramidas <charon@labs.gr> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/30900: a few whitespace corrections for articles/pxe Message-ID: <200109282339.f8SNdnU73659@hades.hell.gr>
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>Number: 30900
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: a few whitespace corrections for articles/pxe
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Fri Sep 28 17:10:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Giorgos Keramidas
>Release: FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #5: Tue Sep 4
19:49:44 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386
>Description:
The attached patch removes whitespace that is not really necessary
from english version of articles/pxe. Especially the first chunk of
the patch that corrects a parenthesis that is not separated from the
previous word seems to be nice.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- patch-ab begins here ---
Index: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.5 article.sgml
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml 12 Aug 2001 23:31:08 -0000 1.5
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pxe/article.sgml 28 Sep 2001 22:50:38 -0000
@@ -171,13 +171,13 @@
</step>
<step>
- <para>Compile a custom kernel for the clients(particularly to avoid
+ <para>Compile a custom kernel for the clients (particularly to avoid
the device config screen at boot) and stick it in
<filename>/usr/tftpboot</filename>.</para>
</step>
<step>
- <para> Make a special <filename>loader.rc</filename> to and install it
+ <para>Make a special <filename>loader.rc</filename> to and install it
in <filename>/usr/tftpboot/boot/loader.rc</filename> so that it
doesn't prompt for the second disk, here's
<ulink url="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~alfred/pxe/loader.rc">;
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
</step>
<step>
- <para> Extract the installer and helper utilities from the mfsroot disk
+ <para>Extract the installer and helper utilities from the mfsroot disk
and uncompress them, put them in <filename>/usr/tftpboot</filename>
as well:</para>
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@
</step>
<step>
- <para> Copy the compressed packages into the packages/All directory
+ <para>Copy the compressed packages into the packages/All directory
under <filename>nfs</filename>.</para>
</step>
--- patch-ab ends here ---
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