Date: Sun, 31 Jan 2016 15:36:43 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48130 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs Message-ID: <201601311536.u0VFahlj001525@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Sun Jan 31 15:36:43 2016 New Revision: 48130 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48130 Log: "Serial commas are only necessary when you want to be correct." Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Sun Jan 31 01:05:17 2016 (r48129) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Sun Jan 31 15:36:43 2016 (r48130) @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ <p>&os; is an advanced computer operating system used to power - modern servers, desktops and + modern servers, desktops, and embedded <a href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>. A large @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">community</a> has continually developed it for more than thirty years. Its advanced - networking, security and storage + networking, security, and storage features have made &os; the platform of choice for many of the <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#introduction-nutshell-users">busiest web sites</a>
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