Date: Sun, 19 May 2002 23:17:52 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/38306: Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and 2.9.13 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200205192117.g4JLHqN3008275@abigail.blackend.org>
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>Number: 38306
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and 2.9.13 of the Handbook
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun May 19 14:30:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Marc Fonvieille
>Release: FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386
>Description:
Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and
2.9.13 of the Handbook. Read the patch below for more details.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org Sun May 19 11:31:25 2002
+++ chapter.sgml Sun May 19 17:51:26 2002
@@ -3931,7 +3931,7 @@
<title>Saving Configuration</title>
<para>When you are satisfied, the configuration can now be saved.
- Select <guimenuitem>Save the configuration and Exit</guimenuitem>
+ Select <guimenuitem>Save the configuration and Exit</guimenuitem>.
The configuration file will be saved to
<filename>/etc/XF86Config</filename>.</para>
</step>
@@ -4026,7 +4026,7 @@
keys and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para>
<para>A menu will display showing all the packages available for
- the selection made.</para>
+ the selection made:</para>
<figure id="package-select">
<title>Select Packages</title>
@@ -4040,7 +4040,7 @@
<para>The <application>bash</application> shell is shown selected.
Select as many as desired by highlighting the package and pressing
- the <keycap>Space</keycap>.
+ the <keycap>Space</keycap> key.
A short description of each package will appear in the lower left
corner of the screen.</para>
@@ -4071,7 +4071,7 @@
<para>Use the arrow keys to select <guibutton>[ Install ]</guibutton>
and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>. You will then need to confirm
- that you want to install the packages.</para>
+ that you want to install the packages:</para>
<figure id="package-install-confirm">
<title>Confirm Package Installation</title>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---
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