Date: Thu, 4 Sep 2003 21:07:35 +0200 From: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de> To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org> Cc: Robert Watson <rwatson@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: [Review Request]: Kerberos5 final draft Message-ID: <20030904210735.A68210@sumuk.de> In-Reply-To: <20030904133402.06da66da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>; from trhodes@freebsd.org on Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400 References: <20030904133402.06da66da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: > Please see the diff and give me feedback. This has already gone > through a good review on -doc so I'm only really waiting for Robert's > review. Although I want to get any final comments or "please commit's" > now. Here are my final markup nits, otherwise I'm fine: > --- chapter.sgml Thu Sep 4 13:12:30 2003 > +++ chapter.new Thu Sep 4 13:19:05 2003 > @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ > servers – meaning that external entities can connect and talk > to them. As yesterday's mini-computers and mainframes become > today's desktops, and as computers become networked and > - internetworked, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para> > + inter-networked, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para> This (still) should be a separate commit. > + <screen>&prompt.user;<userinput>k5init <replaceable>tillman</replaceable></userinput> > + tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG's Password: > + > + &prompt.user;<userinput>k5list</userinput> > + Credentials cache: FILE:<filename>/tmp/krb5cc_500</filename> > + Principal: tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen> > + > + <screen>Issued Expires Principal > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen> > + > + <screen>v4-ticket file: /tmp/tkt500 > + k5list: No ticket file (tf_util)</screen> Why use multiple screen elements here? All output is produced by the k5list command. Therefore one screen element is sufficient. > + <screen>&prompt.root;kadmin Missing space and userinput: &prompt.root; <userinput>kadmin</userinput> > + kadmin> add --random-key host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > + Max ticket life [unlimited]: > + Max renewable life [unlimited]: > + Attributes []: > + kadmin> ext host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > + kadmin> exit</screen> [ ... ] > + <screen>&prompt.root;kadmin > + kadmin> ext --keytab=/tmp/example.keytab host/myserver.smithclan.prv > + kadmin> exit</screen> The commands should be inside <userinput>. -- Marxpitn
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