Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2017 15:14:25 -0800 From: "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> To: "Rodney W. Grimes" <freebsd-rwg@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> Cc: Hiroki Sato <hrs@freebsd.org>, svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers <src-committers@freebsd.org>, ngie@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r314585 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd Message-ID: <9EDDFC3F-80F2-4864-9DF5-BF9F81A9DB4A@gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <E29138D5-DA68-417A-B507-8F89748842FE@gmail.com> References: <201703031356.v23Duoiu069893@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> <E29138D5-DA68-417A-B507-8F89748842FE@gmail.com>
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> On Mar 3, 2017, at 15:12, Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya) <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> wrote:
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>> On Mar 3, 2017, at 05:56, Rodney W. Grimes <freebsd-rwg@pdx.rh.CN85.dnsmgr.net> wrote:
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>>> "Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya@gmail.com> wrote
>>> in <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE@gmail.com>:
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>>> ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or
>>
>> I actually think this right here is the clearest one of all the ones
>> I have seen attempted. Oh, remove the s from accepts.
>
> How about this instead (it incorporates hrs’s suggestion and your’s)?
> Thanks,
> -Ngie
>
> $ svn diff syslogd.8
> Index: syslogd.8
> ===================================================================
> --- syslogd.8 (revision 314626)
> +++ syslogd.8 (working copy)
> @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@
> .Ar service
> of
> .Ql \&*
> -allows packets to be received from any UDP port.
> +accept UDP packets from any source port.
> The default
> .Ar service
> is
Actually, accepts is better. Although it isn’t clear by itself, the sentence fragment is describing the -a option, which is singular, not plural. Here’s the sentence in full context:
source packet must belong to. A
service of `*' accepts UDP
packets from any source port.
Thanks,
-Ngie
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