Date: Wed, 20 Mar 2002 20:37:41 -0500 From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.ORG> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG, FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/35683: Fix amd info Message-ID: <20020320203741.75382b4f.darklogik@pittgoth.com> In-Reply-To: <200203210010.g2L0A3F31097@freefall.freebsd.org>
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On Wed, 20 Mar 2002 16:10:03 -0800 (PST)
Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.ORG> wrote:
> The following reply was made to PR docs/35683; it has been noted by
> GNATS.
>
> From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
> To: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
> Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
> Subject: Re: docs/35683: Fix amd info
> Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2002 02:09:35 +0200 (EET)
>
> On 2002-03-09 16:43:56, Tom Rhodes wrote:
>
> > <para>Due to the diminishing IP space in IPv4, and the
> > increased number of users on high-speed consumer lines
> > such as cable or DSL, people are- in more and more
> > need of an Internet Connection Sharing solution. The+
> > more in need of an Internet Connection Sharing
> > solution. The
>
> `increasingly' in need?
>
> Other than that, I feel my brain going numb when I try to find a
> clear way to describe the 'gateway' hunk of this patch, without
> mentioning the word'gateway'. It still seems funny after the patch
> though :/
>
> Giorgos Keramidas FreeBSD Documentation
> Project keramida@{freebsd.org,ceid.upatras.gr}
> http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/
Maybe... perhaps... we could always describe the gateway as ``the
door to the internet'' or doorway to the outside world...
I like your ``increasingly'' idea, but I do not see the use of
``gateway'' in this paragraph. Here we are kinda opening up
the natd section and trying to create that vision of understanding
for our reader. I'm totally open to suggestions here ;)
--
Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes
www.FreeBSD.org -The Power To Serve
www.Pittgoth.com -Pittgoth Discussion Portal
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