Date: Wed, 20 Feb 2002 22:00:20 +0200 (EET) From: Priit Piipuu <priit@bsd.ee> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/35155: [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2 Message-ID: <200202202000.g1KK0Kf62551@minerva.meskaliin.ee>
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>Number: 35155
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] Misc corrections to the Handbook, chapter 2
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Wed Feb 20 11:40:01 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Priit Piipuu
>Release: FreeBSD 4.5-RC i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD minerva 4.5-RC FreeBSD 4.5-RC #2: Fri Jan 18 20:57:36 EET 2002 priitp@minerva:/usr/src/sys/compile/tuum i386
>Description:
Add missing quote tags, port number change (in next paragraph,
different number will be used) etc.
>How-To-Repeat:
Read the source ;-)
>Fix:
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--- chapter.sgml.old Wed Feb 20 20:59:44 2002
+++ chapter.sgml Wed Feb 20 20:40:32 2002
@@ -994,7 +994,7 @@
<step>
<para>If there are no conflicts listed then you can skip this step.
Otherwise, the remaining conflicts need to be examined. If they
- do not have the indication of an "allowed conflict" in the message
+ do not have the indication of an <quote>allowed conflict</quote> in the message
area, then either the IRQ/address for device probe will need to be
changed, <emphasis>or</emphasis> the IRQ/address on the hardware
will need to be changed.</para>
@@ -2705,7 +2705,7 @@
the real server. For example, assuming you want to install from
<hostid role="fqdn">ftp.FreeBSD.org</hostid>, using the proxy FTP
server <hostid role="fqdn">foo.example.com</hostid>, listening on port
- 1024.</para>
+ 1234.</para>
<para>In this case, you go to the options menu, set the FTP username
to <literal>ftp@ftp.FreeBSD.org</literal>, and the password to your
@@ -2958,7 +2958,7 @@
<para>Choosing <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> and pressing
<keycap>Enter</keycap> will bring
- the machine up on the network and be ready for use after leaving
+ the machine up on the network and be ready for use after
leaving the installation.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -4217,7 +4217,7 @@
use a shell that does not exist or you will not be able to
login.</para>
- <para>The user was also added to the group "wheel" to be able to
+ <para>The user was also added to the group <quote>wheel</quote> to be able to
become a superuser with root privileges.</para>
<para>When you are satisfied, press &gui.ok; and
@@ -4514,7 +4514,7 @@
Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
<para>It is safe to turn off the power after the shutdown command
- has been issued and the message "Please press any key to reboot"
+ has been issued and the message <quote>Please press any key to reboot</quote>
appears. If any key is pressed instead of turning off the power
switch, the system will reboot.</para>
@@ -4821,7 +4821,7 @@
<secondary>headless (serial console)</secondary>
</indexterm>
<indexterm><primary>serial console</primary></indexterm>
- <para>This type of installation is called a "headless install",
+ <para>This type of installation is called a <quote>headless install</quote>,
because the machine that you are trying to install FreeBSD on
either does not have a monitor attached to it, or does not even
have a VGA output. How is this possible you ask? Using a
@@ -4928,9 +4928,9 @@
<para>Here is where you must set the floppy to boot into a
serial console. You have to make a file called
- <filename>boot.config</filename> containing "/boot/loader
- -h". All this does is pass a flag to the bootloader to
- boot into a serial console.</para>
+ <filename>boot.config</filename> containing
+ <quote>/boot/loader -h</quote>. All this does is pass a flag to
+ the bootloader to boot into a serial console.</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo "/boot/loader -h" > boot.config</userinput></screen>
@@ -5002,7 +5002,7 @@
FreeBSD installation media and/or source. This might be physical media,
such as a tape, or a source that <application>Sysinstall</application>
can use to retrieve the files, such as a local FTP site, or an MS-DOS
- partition. For example;</para>
+ partition. For example:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
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