Date: Mon, 9 Jan 2012 18:26:08 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml Message-ID: <201201091826.q09IQ8EN092785@repoman.freebsd.org>
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wblock 2012-01-09 18:26:08 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot chapter.sgml
Log:
Narrow an overwide table, clarify some wording, fix header filenames in
programlistings so they consistently end with a colon, split some long
sentences in two, remove some extraneous commas and words, make a
reference to the Developers Handbook a link, and fix title capitalization.
Approved by: gjb (mentor)
Revision Changes Path
1.31 +32 -30 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.sgml
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