Date: Fri, 14 Sep 2012 17:42:53 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39543 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook Message-ID: <201209141742.q8EHgrq9073044@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Fri Sep 14 17:42:53 2012 New Revision: 39543 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39543 Log: Fix some contractions and abbreviations. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Fri Sep 14 17:27:38 2012 (r39542) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml Fri Sep 14 17:42:53 2012 (r39543) @@ -444,10 +444,9 @@ PLIST_DIRS= lib/X11/oneko</programlistin <para>Once we have looked at your port, we will get back to you if necessary, and put it in the tree. Your name will also - appear in the list of <ulink + be added to the list of <ulink url="&url.articles.contributors;/contrib-additional.html">Additional - FreeBSD Contributors</ulink> and other files. Isn't that - great?!? <!-- smiley -->:-)</para> + FreeBSD Contributors</ulink> and other files.</para> </sect1> </chapter> @@ -3444,7 +3443,7 @@ ALWAYS_KEEP_DISTFILES= yes </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Names are capitalized (e.g. Apache, JavaScript, + <para>Names are capitalized (for example, Apache, JavaScript, Perl);</para> </listitem> @@ -9077,7 +9076,7 @@ CFLAGS+= -DLUA_VERSION_STRING="${VER_STR (<filename>libxul.so</filename>), <literal>seamonkey</literal> (<filename>libgtkembedmoz.so</filename>, deprecated, - shouldn't be used any more).</entry> + should not be used any more).</entry> </row> <row>
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