Date: Wed, 26 Jun 2013 15:42:18 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42066 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview Message-ID: <201306261542.r5QFgI3x072101@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 2013 New Revision: 42066 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42066 Log: Minor wording and formatting changes. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 15:40:23 2013 (r42065) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 15:42:18 2013 (r42066) @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ <acronym>FDP</acronym>. Willingness to contribute is the only membership requirement.</para> - <para>This Primer shows the reader how to:</para> + <para>This primer shows the reader how to:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> @@ -136,8 +136,8 @@ <sect1 id="overview-quick-start"> <title>Quick Start</title> - <para>Here we describe the steps contributors must follow before - they can make changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>. New + <para>Here we describe the steps contributors must take before + making changes to the <acronym>FDP</acronym>. New contributors will interact with other members of the &os; Documentation Team, which can assist in learning to use <acronym>XML</acronym> and the suggestions in @@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ the type of documentation being edited will generate that documentation in split HTML format. For example, to build the English version of the Handbook, type - <userinput>make</userinput> in the + <command>make</command> in the <filename>en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/</filename> directory. This step is necessary to make sure that the edits do not break the build.</para>
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