Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:51 +0000 From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 273983] Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter Message-ID: <bug-273983-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/>
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D273983 Bug ID: 273983 Summary: Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Many People Priority: --- Component: Books & Articles Assignee: doc@FreeBSD.org Reporter: bspiegel100@gmail.com Created attachment 245074 --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=3D245074&action= =3Dedit Suggested patch I've just finished reading the new Jails chapter in the handbook (https://cgit.freebsd.org/doc/commit/?id=3D612b7cc1). It looks terrific--carlavilla@ did a great job rewriting this chapter! I spotted some minor issues: one TODO placeholder to add a missing xref and various nitpicky grammar and style issues throughout (e.g. typos, comma splices, serial comma, title case, etc.). Attached is a patch with suggested fixes and copyedits. I corrected the usa= ge but tried to avoid any substantive changes. Happy to adjust if you have feedback or questions. Thanks for considering! --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=
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