Date: Fri, 24 May 2002 15:28:15 -0700 (PDT) From: Arthur Munn <amunn@comcast.net> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/38525: Documentation error in preface of handbook. Message-ID: <200205242228.g4OMSFoU093709@www.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 38525
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Documentation error in preface of handbook.
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Fri May 24 15:30:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Arthur Munn
>Release: FreeBSD 4.6-RC i386
>Organization:
None
>Environment:
FreeBSD pcp01372333pcs.jamisn01.pa.comcast.net 4.6-RC FreeBSD 4.6-RC #0: Thu May 23 21:37:47 EDT 2002 amunn@pcp01372333.jamisn01.pa.comcast.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC
i386
>Description:
Early in the preface, the handbook introduction is described as:
"Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of the
FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, and everything they've
done for the FreeBSD project."
As far as I can tell, the introduction of the handbook describes all of those things, except what the FreeBSD Project has done for the FreeBSD Project. So my fix just removes:
"and everything they've done for the FreeBSD project"
and cleans up the remaining text.
Also, if you are handling this ceri, notice that I was able to get rid of a contraction with this fix as well. :-)
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
< <para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of
< the FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, and everything else < they've done for the FreeBSD project.</para>
---
> <para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. Describes the history of the
> FreeBSD Project. its goals, and development model.</para>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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