Date: Fri, 25 Sep 2015 17:15:26 +0000 From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 203340] Minor Clarity Improvement to Section 17.14.3.1 Message-ID: <bug-203340-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/>
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=203340 Bug ID: 203340 Summary: Minor Clarity Improvement to Section 17.14.3.1 Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Only Me Priority: --- Component: Documentation Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Reporter: mwalker1025@gmail.com Created attachment 161390 --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=161390&action=edit I hope I did this properly. An extremely minor clarity quibble, regarding the phrasing of one sentence of documentation found in section 17.14.3.1: Recovering from the Split-brain Condition. The original is: "The administrator must decide which node has more important changes or merge them manually." I would rather state the sentence as: "The administrator must either decide which node has more important changes, or perform the merge manually." The attached .patch file contains the change as stated here, assuming that I generated it correctly. -- You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.
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