Date: Mon, 14 Apr 2014 15:59:34 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44551 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install Message-ID: <201404141559.s3EFxY6O008871@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Mon Apr 14 15:59:33 2014 New Revision: 44551 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44551 Log: Fix a few grammos. Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml Mon Apr 14 15:52:42 2014 (r44550) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml Mon Apr 14 15:59:33 2014 (r44551) @@ -243,7 +243,6 @@ <entry>0x1f0</entry> - <entry/> </row> <row> @@ -3565,7 +3564,7 @@ Retype new password :</screen> </mediaobject> </figure> - <para><acronym>RPC</acronym>. communication between + <para><acronym>RPC</acronym> communication between <acronym>NFS</acronym> servers and clients is managed by &man.rpcbind.8; which is required for <acronym>NFS</acronym> servers to operate correctly. Status monitoring is provided @@ -4265,7 +4264,7 @@ Please press any key to reboot.</screen> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>A tape will be be used to install &os;.</para> + <para>A tape will be used to install &os;.</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> @@ -4285,7 +4284,6 @@ Please press any key to reboot.</screen> <para>The ISO images for each release can be downloaded from <filename>ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ISO-IMAGES-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename>; - or the closest mirror. or the closest mirror. Substitute <replaceable>arch</replaceable> and <replaceable>version</replaceable> as appropriate.</para>
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