Date: Sun, 11 Aug 2002 00:10:49 +0200 (CEST) From: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/41531: [PATCH] 4 minor fixes for articles/hubs Message-ID: <20020810221049.9A001ABAE@milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de>
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>Number: 41531
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] 4 minor fixes for articles/hubs
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sat Aug 10 15:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Christian Brueffer
>Release: FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de 4.6-STABLE FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE #2: Fri Jun 28 12:47:08 CEST 2002 chris@milan.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/LORIEN i386
>Description:
4 minor fixes for articles/hubs
(punctuation, spelling and a spare 'to')
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- hubs.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.orig Tue Aug 6 00:48:45 2002
+++ article.sgml Tue Aug 6 01:03:36 2002
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
<title>HTTP (required for webpages, optional for FTP fileset)</title>
<para>
If you want to offer the FreeBSD webpages, you need
- to install a webserver a.k.a <application>httpd</application>.
+ to install a webserver a.k.a. <application>httpd</application>.
You may optionally offer the FTP fileset via HTTP.
The choice of Webserver software is left up to the mirror administrator.
Some of the most popular choices are:
@@ -727,8 +727,8 @@
<para>
Mirrors are organized by country. All
official mirrors have a DNS entry of the form
- <hostid>ftpN.CC.freebsd.org</hostid>. Whith
- <emphasis>CC</emphasis> (i.e. country code) beeing the
+ <hostid>ftpN.CC.freebsd.org</hostid>. With
+ <emphasis>CC</emphasis> (i.e. country code) being the
<emphasis>top level domain</emphasis>
of the country, where this mirror is located;
and <emphasis>N</emphasis> is a number,
@@ -932,7 +932,7 @@
<para>
Tier-1 mirrors are required to:
<itemizedlist>
- <listitem><para>to carry the complete fileset</para></listitem>
+ <listitem><para>carry the complete fileset</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>allow access to other mirror sites</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>provide <application>FTP</application> and
<application>RSYNC</application> access</para></listitem>
--- hubs.diff ends here ---
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