Date: Wed, 4 Jan 2012 13:42:27 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Message-ID: <201201041342.q04DgR4E061403@repoman.freebsd.org>
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bcr 2012-01-04 13:42:27 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml
Log:
A few updates found while translating:
- add between number and unit
- move a sentence stop out of an ulink description
- use &windows; in titles to be consistent (although the "tm" won't show up)
- Use author entity in Kris Moore's case
- Replace FreeBSD with &os; in a few places
- Add an extra space between a ) and the next word and
- de-capitalize daemon to be consistent [1]
[1] reported by: lme
Revision Changes Path
1.24 +10 -10 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sgml
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