Date: Fri, 12 Jul 1996 03:09:49 -0700 From: "Jordan K. Hubbard" <jkh@time.cdrom.com> To: doc@freebsd.org Cc: www@freebsd.org Subject: Anyone up for a little triage on http://www.freebsd.org/about.html? Message-ID: <14029.837166189@time.cdrom.com>
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I don't know about you folks, but that text's been looking a little shopworn to me lately. The problem is that everything I've attempted to write in replacement has swung wildly from dry techiespeak to sheer marketing fluff and I've simply thrown my hands up on getting this one right. I can't quite find the correct balance, but I'm sure I'd know it if I saw it! :-) Any volunteers? The overall style of our current version isn't so bad so much as is the content - I don't think that trumpeting "PRE-EMPTIVE MULTITASKING!" is, for example, quite as effective as citing some more FreeBSD specific feature (e.g. focus on its areas of strength in comparsison to other UN*Xen, not only DOS/Windows as the current one does). Anyway, 2.1.5 is coming out soon and everybody's going to be *looking* at the one we have now. Urgh! Ack! Help! :) Jordan
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