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Date:      Wed, 13 Apr 2022 10:09:53 -0700
From:      John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Mike Karels <karels@FreeBSD.org>, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: git: c4e48b65b7 - main - 13.1 relnotes: Change previous entries to avoid imperative.
Message-ID:  <36b6607e-6a32-cfb0-06fc-ccafeb00409f@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <202204130133.23D1X0Hx031524@gitrepo.freebsd.org>
References:  <202204130133.23D1X0Hx031524@gitrepo.freebsd.org>

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On 4/12/22 6:33 PM, Mike Karels wrote:
> The branch main has been updated by karels (src committer):
> 
> URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=c4e48b65b76ff0ae15de17969d152233eeac83c4
> 
> commit c4e48b65b76ff0ae15de17969d152233eeac83c4
> Author:     Mike Karels <karels@FreeBSD.org>
> AuthorDate: 2022-04-12 21:40:17 +0000
> Commit:     Mike Karels <karels@FreeBSD.org>
> CommitDate: 2022-04-13 01:32:44 +0000
> 
>      13.1 relnotes: Change previous entries to avoid imperative.
>      
>      Change previous entries from "Add ..." to "... has been added",
>      etc, for consistency.
>      
>      Reviewed by:    pauamma_gundo.com
>      Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D34892

Hmm, for 13.0 we explicitly used active voice rather than passive.  I don't know
that we have a definitive style guide for release notes though.

-- 
John Baldwin



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