Date: Sun, 14 Oct 2012 16:01:09 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39750 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge Message-ID: <201210141601.q9EG19Jh096076@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Sun Oct 14 16:01:08 2012 New Revision: 39750 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39750 Log: Remove contractions, fix spelling errors and title capitalization. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Sun Oct 14 15:48:05 2012 (r39749) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Sun Oct 14 16:01:08 2012 (r39750) @@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ before running "/usr/sbin/freebsd-update </author> </authorgroup> </sect1info> - <title>Portsnap: A Ports Collection Update Tool</title> + <title>Portsnap: a Ports Collection Update Tool</title> <indexterm><primary>Updating and Upgrading</primary></indexterm> <indexterm> @@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. </warning> <warning> - <title>Do not use <command>make world</command></title> + <title>Do Not Use <command>make world</command></title> <para>A lot of older documentation recommends using <command>make world</command> for this. Doing that skips @@ -1932,16 +1932,16 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. </listitem> </orderedlist> - <para>Note that if you're upgrading from one release of the same &os; + <para>Note that if you are upgrading from one release of the same &os; branch to a more recent release of the same branch, i.e., from 7.0 to 7.1, then this procedure may not be absolutely necessary, since - you're unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, + you are unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, kernel, userland and configuration files. The older approach of <command>make <maketarget>world</maketarget></command> followed by building and installing a new kernel might work well enough for minor updates.</para> - <para>But, when upgrading across major releases, people who don't + <para>But, when upgrading across major releases, people who do not follow this procedure should expect some problems.</para> <para>It is also worth noting that many upgrades @@ -2965,7 +2965,7 @@ Building everything.. </author> </authorgroup> </sect1info> - <title>Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries</title> + <title>Deleting Obsolete Files, Directories and Libraries</title> <indexterm> <primary>Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries</primary> </indexterm> @@ -3049,7 +3049,7 @@ Building everything.. role="package">ports-mgmt/portmaster</filename> and <filename role="package">ports-mgmt/portupgrade</filename> utilities can be used to automate this process. After you've made sure that all ports are rebuilt - and do not use the old libraries anymore, you can delete them using the + and do not use the old libraries any more, you can delete them using the following command:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make delete-old-libs</userinput></screen>
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