Date: Sat, 4 May 2002 15:40:03 +0100 From: Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net> To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Clarification on the Handbook's Preface Message-ID: <20020504144003.GA5163@submonkey.net>
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From doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml :
<term><emphasis>Chapter 1, Introduction</emphasis></term>
<listitem>
<para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the
history of the FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model,
and everything else they've done for the FreeBSD project.</para>
</listitem>
Does anybody else want to join me in a rousing chorus of "What?!" ?
The last line doesn't seem to make any sense whatsoever, and I can't fathom
what it's trying to get at.
If anyone does know what that text wants to say, could they fix it, otherwise
how about the following patch ?
--- preface.sgml.old Sat May 4 15:38:13 2002
+++ preface.sgml Sat May 4 15:38:04 2002
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the
history of the FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model,
- and everything else they've done for the FreeBSD project.</para>
+ and other aspects of the project.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
Ceri
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