Date: Fri, 12 Jul 2013 04:05:39 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42259 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer Message-ID: <201307120405.r6C45d4B047081@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Fri Jul 12 04:05:39 2013 New Revision: 42259 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42259 Log: Fix title capitalization and indexterm. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri Jul 12 03:52:31 2013 (r42258) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/xml-primer/chapter.xml Fri Jul 12 04:05:39 2013 (r42259) @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ <para>The markup is clearly separate from the content.</para> - <para>Markup languages define what + <para>Markup languages define what the markup means and how it should be interpreted.</para> <para>Of course, one markup language might not be enough. A @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ the paragraph elements, and so on.</para> <example> - <title>Elements within Elements; <sgmltag>em</sgmltag></title> + <title>Elements Within Elements; <sgmltag>em</sgmltag></title> <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">p</sgmltag>This is a simple <sgmltag class="starttag">em</sgmltag>paragraph<sgmltag class="endtag">em</sgmltag> where some of the <sgmltag class="starttag">em</sgmltag>words<sgmltag class="endtag">em</sgmltag> have been <sgmltag class="starttag">em</sgmltag>emphasized<sgmltag class="endtag">em</sgmltag>.<sgmltag class="endtag">p</sgmltag></programlisting> @@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ then the default is <literal>left</literal>.</para> <example> - <title>Using An Element with An Attribute</title> + <title>Using an Element with an Attribute</title> <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">p align="left"</sgmltag>The inclusion of the align attribute on this paragraph was superfluous, since the default is left.<sgmltag class="endtag">p</sgmltag> @@ -565,10 +565,10 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er </variablelist> <sect2> - <title>Formal Public Identifiers (<acronym>FPI</acronym>s) - <indexterm significance="preferred"> - <primary>Formal Public Identifier</primary> - </indexterm></title> + <title>Formal Public Identifiers (<acronym>FPI</acronym>s)</title> + <indexterm significance="preferred"> + <primary>Formal Public Identifier</primary> + </indexterm> <note> <para>It is not necessary to know this, but it is useful @@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er termed <quote>marked sections</quote>.</para> <example> - <title>Structure of A Marked Section</title> + <title>Structure of a Marked Section</title> <programlisting><![<replaceable>KEYWORD</replaceable>[ Contents of marked section @@ -1456,7 +1456,7 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er ignored and the second one will take effect.</para> <example> - <title>Using A Parameter Entity to Control a Marked + <title>Using a Parameter Entity to Control a Marked Section</title> <programlisting>
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