Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 16:24:11 +0000 (UTC) From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme Message-ID: <201705181624.v4IGOBPb013236@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: gjb Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 New Revision: 318468 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468 Log: Fix grammar nits. Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ </itemizedlist> <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but - believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> + believed to also be supported by &os;:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> @@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ </itemizedlist> <para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested - but believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> + but believed to also be supported by &os;:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> @@ -620,11 +620,11 @@ is highly recommended to try to keep the formatting of this section consistent. - We give manpage references using the &man entities where - possible. If a driver has no manpage (and consequently no + We give manual page references using the &man entities where + possible. If a driver has no manual page (and consequently no &man entity, we simply give the name of the driver). Please avoid doing &man entity conversions unless you - know for sure that an entity and manpage exist; sweeps through + know for sure that an entity and manual page exist; sweeps through this file to fix "missed" conversions are likely to break the build. --> Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ <para>For any questions or general technical support issues, please send mail to the &a.questions;.</para> - <para>If you're tracking the &release.branch; development + <para>If you are tracking the &release.branch; development efforts, you <emphasis>must</emphasis> join the &a.current;, in order to keep abreast of recent developments and changes that may affect the way you use and maintain the
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