Date: Sat, 2 Jun 2012 16:50:05 -0600 (MDT) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.org, svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r38967 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206021648380.97625@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206021552430.97625@wonkity.com> References: <201206022143.q52LhBiJ015607@svn.freebsd.org> <4FCA89B2.9030704@FreeBSD.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1206021552430.97625@wonkity.com>
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On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Warren Block wrote: > On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Benedict Reuschling wrote: > >> Am 02.06.12 23:43, schrieb Benedict Reuschling: >>> Author: bcr >>> Date: Sat Jun 2 21:43:10 2012 >>> New Revision: 38967 >>> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38967 >>> >>> Log: >>> This change adds much more information about syslogd and newsyslog >>> than we had before in the configuration chapter. It describes how >>> the system logger can be configured, the rationale behind it and >>> the most important field that the user should edit. >> >> Argh, this should read "fields", as there are many fields to edit, of >> course. ;-) > > Also needs another comma: > > It describes how the system logger can be configured, the rationale > behind it and the most important field that the user should edit. > ^ > > Justification: "Use the serial comma" in > http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.html#WRITING-STYLE This is what happens when I try to do too many things at once. Sorry about that.
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