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Date:      Tue, 1 Sep 2020 15:30:40 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Ed Maste <emaste@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r365049 - head/share/man/man7
Message-ID:  <202009011530.081FUeZW001554@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: emaste
Date: Tue Sep  1 15:30:40 2020
New Revision: 365049
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/365049

Log:
  release.7: update for current context
  
  It's no longer unusual to be able to build a release with a single
  command, so drop "actually" that hints at a surprise.  Also just use
  "network install directory" instead of referencing FTP; it's more
  likely to be HTTP now.
  
  Reviewed by:	gjb
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D26260

Modified:
  head/share/man/man7/release.7

Modified: head/share/man/man7/release.7
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man7/release.7	Tue Sep  1 15:15:44 2020	(r365048)
+++ head/share/man/man7/release.7	Tue Sep  1 15:30:40 2020	(r365049)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd January 16, 2020
+.Dd September 1, 2020
 .Dt RELEASE 7
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ All of the tools necessary to build a release are avai
 .Fx
 source code repository in
 .Pa src/release .
-A complete release can actually be built with only a single command,
+A complete release can be built with only a single command,
 including the creation of ISO images suitable for burning to CD-ROM,
-memory stick images, and an FTP install directory.
+memory stick images, and a network install directory.
 This command is aptly named
 .Dq Li "make release" .
 .Pp
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ assurance, or other aspects of the release engineering
 .Sh CLEAN RELEASE GENERATION
 Official releases of
 .Fx
-are produced in a totally clean environment to
+are produced in a clean environment to
 ensure consistency between the versions of the src, ports, and doc trees
 and to avoid contamination from the host system
 .Po such as local patches, changes



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