Date: Sun, 19 May 2002 01:12:02 -0400 (EDT) From: Chris Pepper <pepper@mail.rockefeller.edu> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/38276: HTML & text cleanup Message-ID: <200205190512.g4J5C2411413@guest.reppep.com>
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>Number: 38276
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: HTML & text cleanup
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sat May 18 22:20:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Chris Pepper
>Release: FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 4.5-RELEASE FreeBSD 4.5-RELEASE #0: Mon Jan 28 14:31:56 GMT 2002 murray@builder.freebsdmall.com:/usr/src/sys/compile/GENERIC i386
>Description:
Add hostid tag to domain name.
Clarify that *sendmail* must be restarted (current wording is ambiguous).
A few more minor clean-ups.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
SGML diff attached.
--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.49
diff -u -r1.49 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 2002/05/12 23:34:30 1.49
+++ chapter.sgml 2002/05/19 05:02:13
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@
the local host name. Place any domains or hosts that
<application>sendmail</application> is to be receiving mail for.
For example, if this mail server was to accept mail for the
- domain example.com and the host
+ domain <hostid role="domainname">example.com</hostid> and the host
<hostid>mail.example.com</hostid>, its
<filename>local-host-names</filename> might look something like
this:</para>
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@
mail.example.com</programlisting>
<para>When this file is updated, &man.sendmail.8; needs to be
- restarted for it to read the changes.</para>
+ restarted to read the changes.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -416,14 +416,14 @@
<para><application>sendmail</application>'s master configuration
file, <filename>sendmail.cf</filename> controls the overall
behavior of <application>sendmail</application>, including everything
- from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing reject messages for
+ from rewriting e-mail addresses to printing rejection messages to
remote mail servers. Naturally, with such a diverse role, this
configuration file is quite complex and its details are a bit
out of the scope of this section. Fortunately, this file rarely
needs to be changed for standard mail servers.</para>
<para>The master <application>sendmail</application> configuration
- file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define features
+ file can be built from &man.m4.1; macros that define the features
and behavior of sendmail. Please see
<filename>/usr/src/contrib/sendmail/cf/README</filename> for
some of the details.</para>
@@ -436,11 +436,11 @@
<sect2>
<title><filename>/etc/mail/virtusertable</filename></title>
- <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail for
+ <para>The <filename>virtualusertable</filename> maps mail addresses for
virtual domains and
mailboxes to real mailboxes. These mailboxes can be local,
- remote, an alias defined in
- <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or a file.</para>
+ remote, aliases defined in
+ <filename>/etc/mail/aliases</filename> or files.</para>
<example>
<title>Example Virtual Domain Mail Map</title>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---
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