Date: Sun, 12 Nov 2006 11:44:21 +0100 From: Johann Kois <jkois@freebsd.org> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200611121144.28895.jkois@freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <200611120013.kAC0D5GM097268@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200611120013.kAC0D5GM097268@repoman.freebsd.org>
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On Sunday 12 November 2006 01:13 Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
> keramida 2006-11-12 00:13:05 UTC
>
> FreeBSD doc repository
>
> Modified files:
> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
> Log:
> Wording fixes and other minor nits to the 'Security' chapter.
>
> Submitted by: Niclas Zeising <lothrandil@n00b.apagnu.se>
> PR: docs/105256
>
> Revision Changes Path
> 1.307 +26 -27 =20
> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
Hello,
just MFen'd this commit to the german handbook and now I have
one question. In my opinion the word "Ssh" looks very strange
(even if it is the first word in the sentence) so I think it
would be better to change it into something like the version
in the following diff:
=2D-- chapter.sgml Sun Nov 12 01:13:04 2006
+++ chapter.sgml.new Sun Nov 12 11:12:55 2006
@@ -935,7 +935,7 @@
<option>-x</option> option. <application>ssh</application>
encrypts everything by default.</para>
=2D <para>Ssh works quite well in every
+ <para><application>ssh</application> works quite well in every
respect except that it forwards encryption keys by default. =20
What
this means is that if you have a secure workstation holding=20
keys
that give you access to the rest of the system, and you
Additionally we now have six different versions of "ssh" in this
document which I find a little bit confusing:
=2D Ssh
=2D ssh
=2D SSH
=2D <application>Ssh</application>
=2D <application>ssh</application>
=2D <application>SSH</application>
Maybe a little cleanup is needed here? Any thoughts?
J. Kois
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