Date: Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:42:27 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44652 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall Message-ID: <201404242142.s3OLgRXF054611@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Thu Apr 24 21:42:26 2014 New Revision: 44652 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44652 Log: Fix links. Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 20:50:14 2014 (r44651) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:42:26 2014 (r44652) @@ -196,9 +196,8 @@ <title>&os;/&arch.sparc64;</title> <para>Systems supported by &os;/&arch.sparc64; are listed at - the <link - xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/sparc.html">; - FreeBSD/sparc64</link> Project.</para> + the FreeBSD/sparc64 Project (<link + xlink:href="&url.base;/platforms/sparc.html">http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/sparc.html</link>).</para>; <para>A dedicated disk is required for &os;/&arch.sparc64;. It is not possible to share a disk with another operating @@ -213,9 +212,9 @@ release are listed in the Hardware Notes file. Usually named <filename>HARDWARE.TXT</filename>, the file is located in the root directory of the release media. Copies of the supported - hardware list are also available on the <link - xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Release - Information</link> page of the &os; web site.</para> + hardware list are also available on the Release Information + page of the &os; web site (<link + xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html</link>).</para>; </sect2> </sect1> @@ -272,7 +271,7 @@ inconvenient workarounds like logical partitions.</para> <warning> - <para>Some older operating systems like &windows; XP + <para>Some older operating systems, like &windows; XP, are not compatible with the <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition scheme. If &os; will be sharing a disk with such an operating system, @@ -281,9 +280,9 @@ </warning> <para>&os;'s standard boot loader requires either a primary or - <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition. (See + <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition. Refer to <xref linkend="boot"/> for more information about the &os; - booting process.) If all of the primary or + booting process. If all of the primary or <acronym>GPT</acronym> partitions are already in use, one must be freed for &os;.</para> @@ -295,12 +294,12 @@ user interface will be used. Third-party application software requires more space.</para> - <para>A variety of <link - xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_disk_partitioning_software">; - free and commercial partition resizing tools</link> are - available. <link - xlink:href="http://gparted.sourceforge.net/livecd.php">GParted - Live</link> is a free Live CD which includes the + <para>A variety of free and commercial partition resizing + tools are listed at <link + xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_disk_partitioning_software">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_disk_partitioning_software</link>. + <application>GParted Live</application> (<link + xlink:href="http://gparted.sourceforge.net/livecd.php">http://gparted.sourceforge.net/livecd.php</link>) + is a free Live CD which includes the <application>GParted</application> partition editor. <application>GParted</application> is also included with many other Linux Live CD distributions.</para> @@ -416,18 +415,15 @@ release of &os; is as stable as possible, bugs occasionally creep into the process. On very rare occasions those bugs affect the installation process. As these problems are - discovered and fixed, they are noted in the <link - xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/&rel.current;R/errata.html">FreeBSD - Errata</link> on the &os; web site. Check the errata before + discovered and fixed, they are noted in the &os; Errata (<link + xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/&rel.current;R/errata.html">http://www.freebsd.org/releases/&rel.current;R/errata.html</link>) + on the &os; web site. Check the errata before installing to make sure that there are no problems that might affect the installation.</para> <para>Information and errata for all the releases can be found - on the - <link xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">release - information</link> section of the - <link xlink:href="&url.base;/index.html">&os; web - site</link>.</para> + on the release information section of the &os; web site (<link + xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">http://www.freebsd.org/releases/index.html</link>).</para>; </sect2> <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-installation-media"> @@ -446,9 +442,9 @@ CD is consequently much smaller, and reduces bandwidth usage during the install by only downloading required files.</para> - <para>Copies of &os; installation media are available at the - <link xlink:href="&url.base;/where.html#download">&os; web - site</link>. Also download + <para>Copies of &os; installation media are available at + <link xlink:href="&url.base;/where.html#download">www.freebsd.org/where.html#download</link>. + Also download <filename>CHECKSUM.SHA256</filename> from the same directory as the image file, and use it to check the image file's integrity by calculating a <emphasis>checksum</emphasis>. @@ -661,9 +657,10 @@ commit your changes?</literallayout> <listitem> <para>This particular <acronym>BIOS</acronym> does not - support booting from the desired media. The <link - xlink:href="http://www.plop.at/en/bootmanager.html">Plop - Boot Manager</link> can be used to boot older + support booting from the desired media. The + <application>Plop Boot Manager</application> (<link + xlink:href="http://www.plop.at/en/bootmanager.html">http://www.plop.at/en/bootmanager.html</link>) + can be used to boot older computers from CD or USB media.</para> </listitem> </orderedlist> @@ -740,9 +737,9 @@ Loading /boot/defaults/loader.conf <screen><userinput>boot cd:,\ppc\loader cd:0</userinput></screen> - <para>For Xserves without keyboards, see <link - xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA26930">&apple;'s - support web site</link> about booting into Open + <para>For Xserves without keyboards, refer to <link + xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA26930">http://support.apple.com/kb/TA26930</link>; + about booting into Open Firmware.</para> </sect3> @@ -973,16 +970,16 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <para>Check the probe results carefully to make sure that &os; found all the devices. If a device was not found, it will not be listed. Refer to - <link linkend="kernelconfig-custom-kernel">Kernel - modules</link> for instructions on how to add in support for devices + <xref linkend="kernelconfig-custom-kernel"/> + for instructions on how to add in support for devices which are not in the <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel.</para> - <para>After the procedure of device probing, + <para>After the procedure of device probing, the menu shown in <xref linkend="bsdinstall-choose-mode"/> will be displayed. The install media - can be used in three ways: to install &os;, as a - <link linkend="using-live-cd">live CD</link>, or - to simply access a &os; shell. Use the arrow keys to choose + can be used in three ways: to install &os;, as a live CD as described in + <xref linkend="using-live-cd"/>, or + to access a &os; shell. Use the arrow keys to choose an option, and <keycap>Enter</keycap> to select.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-choose-mode"> @@ -1010,10 +1007,10 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <note> <para>&a.kmoore.email;'s <application>pc-sysinstall</application> is included with - <link xlink:href="http://pcbsd.org">PC-BSD</link>, and can - also be used to <link - xlink:href="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD">; - install &os;</link>. Although sometimes confused with + PC-BSD and can + be used to install &os; using the instructions at <link + xlink:href="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD">http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD</link>. + Although sometimes confused with <application>bsdinstall</application>, the two are not related.</para> </note> @@ -1482,10 +1479,9 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <tbody> <row> <entry>APM</entry> - <entry><link - xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692">Apple - Partition Map, used by &powerpc; - &macintosh;.</link></entry> + <entry>Apple Partition Map, used by &powerpc; + &macintosh; (<link + xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692">http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692</link>).</entry>; </row> <row> @@ -1497,29 +1493,25 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <row> <entry>GPT</entry> - <entry><link - xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GUID_Partition_Table">GUID - Partition Table.</link></entry> + <entry>GUID Partition Table (<link + xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GUID_Partition_Table">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GUID_Partition_Table</link>).</entry>; </row> <row> <entry>MBR</entry> - <entry><link - xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_boot_record">Master - Boot Record.</link></entry> + <entry>Master Boot Record (<link + xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_boot_record">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_boot_record</link>).</entry>; </row> <row> <entry>PC98</entry> - <entry><link - xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801">MBR - variant, used by NEC PC-98 - computers.</link></entry> + <entry>MBR ariant used by NEC PC-98 computers (<link + xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801</link>).</entry>; </row> <row> <entry>VTOC8</entry> - <entry>Volume Table Of Contents, used by Sun SPARC64 and + <entry>Volume Table Of Contents used by Sun SPARC64 and UltraSPARC computers.</entry> </row> </tbody> @@ -1565,7 +1557,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <para>Another partition type worth noting is <literal>freebsd-zfs</literal>, used for partitions that will - contain a &os; <acronym>ZFS</acronym> filesystem. See + contain a &os; <acronym>ZFS</acronym> file system. <xref linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>. &man.gpart.8; shows more of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition types.</para> @@ -1716,8 +1708,9 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is benefit of ensuring that pools created on 512 byte disks will be able to have 4k sector disks added to them in the future, for additional storage space, or as replacements for failed - disks. The installer can also optionally employ <link - linkend="disks-encrypting-geli">GELI</link> disk encryption. + disks. The installer can also optionally employ GELI disk + encryption as described in <xref + linkend="disks-encrypting-geli"/>. If encryption is enabled, a 2 GB unencrypted boot pool is created that contains the <filename>/boot</filename> directory, which holds the kernel and other files necessary @@ -1744,8 +1737,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is constitute the pool. The automatic <acronym>ZFS</acronym> installer currently only supports the creation of a single top level vdev, except in stripe mode. To create more complex - pools, use <link - linkend="bsdinstall-part-shell">Shell Mode</link> to create + pools, use the instructions in <xref + linkend="bsdinstall-part-shell"/> to create the pool. The installer supports the creation of various pool types, including stripe (not recommended, no redundancy), mirror (best performance, least usable space), and RAID-Z 1, @@ -1953,8 +1946,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <para>Once all requested distribution files have been extracted, <application>bsdinstall</application> will then drop straight - into the post-installation configuration tasks (see - <xref linkend="bsdinstall-post"/>).</para> + into the post-installation configuration tasks described in + <xref linkend="bsdinstall-post"/>.</para> </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="bsdinstall-post"> @@ -2222,7 +2215,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <para><acronym>SLAAC</acronym> allows an IPv6 network component to request autoconfiguration information from a local router. See <link - xlink:href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4862">RFC4862</link>; + xlink:href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4862">http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4862</link>; for more information.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-net-ipv6-slaac"> @@ -2956,15 +2949,15 @@ login:</screen> impossible for probing to be 100% reliable, however, there are a few things to try if it fails.</para> - <para>Check the <link - xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Hardware - Notes</link> document for the version of &os; to make sure + <para>Check the Hardware Notes (<link + xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">http://www.freebsd.org/releases/index.html</link>) + document for the version of &os; to make sure your hardware is supported.</para> <para>If the hardware is supported and - lock-ups or other problems occur, build a - <link linkend="kernelconfig">custom kernel</link> which - adds support for devices which are not present + lock-ups or other problems occur, build a custom kernel using the instructions in + <xref linkend="kernelconfig"/> to + add support for devices which are not present in the <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel. The kernel on the boot disks is configured assuming that most hardware devices are in their factory default configuration in terms of IRQs,
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