Date: Thu, 24 Apr 2014 21:46:37 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44653 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall Message-ID: <201404242146.s3OLkbIa055385@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 2014 New Revision: 44653 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44653 Log: Fix filesystem and use of "just" and "simply". Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:42:26 2014 (r44652) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 2014 (r44653) @@ -530,7 +530,7 @@ <emphasis>not</emphasis> a regular file. It is an <emphasis>image</emphasis> of the complete contents of the memory stick. It <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> - simply be copied like a regular file, but must be + be copied like a regular file, but must be written directly to the target device with &man.dd.1;:</para> @@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <calloutlist> <callout arearefs="bsdinstall-prompt-single"> - <para>This is the prompt used on systems with just one + <para>This is the prompt used on systems with one CPU.</para> </callout> @@ -1384,8 +1384,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>The entire disk can be allocated to &os;, or just a - portion of it. If + <para>The entire disk or a portion of it can be allocated to &os;. + If <guibutton>[ Entire Disk ]</guibutton> is chosen, a general partition layout filling the whole disk is created. Selecting @@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <listitem> <para><literal>freebsd-ufs</literal> - A &os; UFS - filesystem.</para> + file system.</para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -1562,11 +1562,11 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition types.</para> - <para>Multiple filesystem partitions can be used, and some + <para>Multiple file system partitions can be used, and some people may prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions for the <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>, <filename>/tmp</filename>, and - <filename>/usr</filename> filesystems. See + <filename>/usr</filename> file systems. See <xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an example.</para> @@ -1587,7 +1587,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is </tip> <para>A mountpoint is needed if this partition will contain a - filesystem. If only a single UFS partition will be created, + file system. If only a single UFS partition will be created, the mountpoint should be <filename>/</filename>.</para> <para>A <emphasis>label</emphasis> is also requested. A label @@ -1604,7 +1604,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is in <filename>/dev/</filename>.</para> <tip> - <para>Use a unique label on every filesystem to avoid + <para>Use a unique label on every file system to avoid conflicts from identical labels. A few letters from the computer's name, use, or location can be added to the label. For instance, <literal>labroot</literal> or @@ -1613,13 +1613,13 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is </tip> <example xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"> - <title>Creating Traditional Split Filesystem + <title>Creating Traditional Split File System Partitions</title> <para>For a traditional partition layout where the <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>, <filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename> - directories are separate filesystems on their own + directories are separate file systems on their own partitions, create a GPT partitioning scheme, then create the partitions as shown. Partition sizes shown are typical for a 20G target disk. If more space is available on the @@ -2909,7 +2909,8 @@ login:</screen> <title>&os; Shutdown</title> <para>Proper shutdown of a &os; computer helps protect data and - even hardware from damage. Do not just turn off the power. + even hardware from damage. Do not turn off the power before + the system has been properly shut down. If the user is a member of the <systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group, become the superuser by typing <command>su</command> at the command
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