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Date:      Mon, 11 Mar 2002 19:07:46 +0100 (CET)
From:      Alex Dupre <sysadmin@alexdupre.com>
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject:   docs/35785: [Patch] picobsd.8 man page corrections
Message-ID:  <200203111807.g2BI7ku00268@vaio.alexdupre.com>

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>Number:         35785
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [Patch] picobsd.8 man page corrections
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Mar 11 10:10:00 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Alex Dupre
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-ALEXDUPRE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD vaio.alexdupre.com 4.5-ALEXDUPRE
	FreeBSD 4.5-ALEXDUPRE #0: Sun Mar 10 23:48:11 CET 2002
	alex@vaio.alexdupre.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/VAIO i386


	
>Description:
A few small fixes to the picobsd man page.

src/share/man/man8/picobsd.8
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	

--- picobsd.diff begins here ---
--- picobsd.8.orig	Mon Mar 11 18:21:37 2002
+++ picobsd.8	Mon Mar 11 19:00:31 2002
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 instead the one at
 .Ar /usr/src .
 Can be useful for cross-building floppy images.
-When using this option, you must also create initialize the subtree at
+When using this option, you must also initialize the subtree at
 .Ar SRC_PATH/../usr
 with the correct include files, libraries and tools (such as the
 .Xr config 8
@@ -113,7 +113,6 @@
 .It Fl c
 .It Fl clean
 Clean the product of previous builds.
-.Xr etherboot
 .El
 .Sh ENVIRONMENT
 As a result of the extreme size limitations, the
@@ -175,8 +174,6 @@
 .Bl -hang -width "install  "
 .It dial
 is a configuration suitable for dial-out (ppp) networking.
-.It install
-is a configuration suitable for software installation.
 .It isp
 is a configuration suitable for dial-in (ppp) networking.
 .It net
@@ -231,7 +228,7 @@
 .Pa picobsd
 script (optional). The most important variables here are
 .Pa MY_DEVS
-which should be set to the list of device which should be
+which should be set to the list of devices which should be
 created in the
 .Pa /dev
 directory of the image (it is really the argument passed to
@@ -334,15 +331,14 @@
 The first form will install the image on the entire disk, and it
 should work in the same way as from a floppy.
 .Pp
-The second form will install the
+The second form will install the image
 on slice number 3 (which should be large enough to store the
 content of the image). However the process will only have success if the
 partition does not contain a valid disklabel, otherwise the kernel will
 likely prevent overwriting the label. In this case you can use the
 third form, replacing NN with the actual start of the partition
 (as you can tell from
-.Nm fdisk
-).
+.Nm fdisk ).
 Note that after saving the image to the slice, it will not be
 recognised yet, you have to use the disklabel command to
 properly initialize the label (don't ask why!).
@@ -445,9 +441,9 @@
 You can use the
 .Pa $hostname
 variable to create different configurations from the same file.
-.Pa
 After taking control back,
-.Pa /etc/rc1 completes the initializations, and as part of this
+.Pa /etc/rc1
+completes the initializations, and as part of this
 it configures network interfaces and optionally calls the
 firewall configuration script,
 .Pa /etc/rc.firewall ,
@@ -564,7 +560,7 @@
 If invoked without arguments,
 .Nm update
 edits and saves
-.Pa rc.conf
+.Pa rc.conf ,
 .Pa rc.firewall
 and
 .Pa master.passwd .
--- picobsd.diff ends here ---


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